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vaysh ([personal profile] vaysh) wrote in [community profile] sherlock602014-08-13 03:58 pm
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The Speckled Band: The Jungle Within (PG)

Canon Story: The Speckled Band
Title: The Jungle Within
Author: [livejournal.com profile] vaysh
Rating: PG
Words: 60
Author's Notes: I invented the name of Roylott's wife and Helen's mother – Lillian – as no first name is given in the story.


India had become his home – the heat hotter than his temper, beasts wilder than his rage. After Lilian's death he had tried to rein it in. But the tiger was always pushing, always clawing. He had brought India to Stoke Moran – her animals, the travelling folk. They soothed him, let him be. He could no longer live outside the jungle.

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2014-08-13 04:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Very interesting take on the story.

[identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com 2014-08-13 06:18 pm (UTC)(link)
What an excellently thought and written story - in 60 words, too.

Thank you, also, for pointing out why Roylott encouraged the gypsies. I hadn't seen it before, and found it puzzling.
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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com 2014-08-13 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
What a fascinating character study - it really does feel as though you've given us a glimpse into his disturbed mind.

[identity profile] tardisjournal.livejournal.com 2014-08-14 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
What a fascinating point of view! It just goes to show there are two sides (at least) to every story. Perhaps today Roylott would be given medication and therapy to deal with all that anger, and things never would have got to the point they did!

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[personal profile] debriswoman 2014-08-14 08:14 am (UTC)(link)
That presents a slightly more sympathetic view of his state of mind, and the reason for it. Not excusing his behaviour, but an explanation.

Very well done:-)