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Canon Story: A Study in Scarlet
Title: Initiation
Author: [livejournal.com profile] hisietari
Rating: G
A/N: My second round of 60s will concentrate on the Moriarty family, which I've based on canon as far as possible, but tweaked a lot due to gaps in canon. You can find a family tree and some explanation in my journal, but please feel free to ask, too.
Three for the price of one! Played a bit of doomsday fairy by placing important events of some major characters all in one year.


I

Officer Higgins would never be more than a copper, and he did not mind. He saw, but wouldn’t ask, and he didn’t enquire why one evening in the summer of 1881 Icy Jane, their best whistle-blower, got arrested. Not even five hours later she was led away, accompanied by some weird government fellow called Holmes. They never saw her again.

II

It couldn’t have gone better. Freshly returned from service in India, Michael O’Connor had been approached by several publishers for his memoirs. Before he knew, his tales had sparked a wildfire. The letters of admiration he did find a little ridiculous, especially when written by academics such as that young mathematician Moriarty. The boy couldn’t hear enough about tiger hunters.

III

Old Mrs Coulter had gladly taken care of late Mrs Moriarty's youngest daughter. A peculiar child, not quite right in the head, four years old and silent as a stone. Until dearest Doctor Petersen visited to check upon Mrs Coulter's increasing state of indisposition. “Poison in his pocket” little Mercy sang, sang at Mrs Coulter’s grave, too, until Petersen confessed.

Date: 2012-09-02 09:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-enigma.livejournal.com
Not exactly sure how to respond to this one! Wow! Doomsday indeed. Enjoyed them all. Particularly liked the hint about the tiger hunters in story II.

Date: 2012-09-02 11:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-enigma.livejournal.com
It works :)

Date: 2012-09-02 04:17 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-09-02 06:40 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
You write some gently sinister tales:-) The tiger hunt reference was intriguing, and I particularly liked the story of Mercy Moriarty, seeing all and only speaking when it counted.

Date: 2012-09-02 07:01 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
I find itinteresting to get your ideas of what else is going on while we focus on Baker Street:-)

And there was no hint of a cheesy road...not even signposts for one:-)

Date: 2012-09-02 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] impulsereader.livejournal.com
Your Moriarty family continues to be - fascinating? I think I'll go with terrifyingly fascinating...

Date: 2012-09-02 07:14 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
:-)

I think I can safely say that it hasn't led to you wearing rose-tinted spectacles...

Date: 2012-09-02 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bwblack.livejournal.com
"“Poison in his pocket” little Mercy sang, sang at Mrs Coulter’s grave, too, until Petersen confessed.">>>

So haunting. So creepy. So awesome! I just love this series!

Sunday, 2 September 2012

Date: 2012-09-03 02:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] livejournal.livejournal.com
User [livejournal.com profile] thisprettywren referenced to your post from Sunday, 2 September 2012 (http://holmesian-news.livejournal.com/233352.html) saying: [...] by (Holmes, Watson | G | ACD) Initiation [...]

Date: 2012-09-03 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] castiron.livejournal.com
Very interesting!

Date: 2012-09-03 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spacemutineer.livejournal.com
Menace and danger is suffused in these Moriarty pieces, much like the man himself.

Date: 2012-09-04 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snycock.livejournal.com
You've definitely made this family very creepy, as I guess befits the family of the Napoleon of crime. The image of the little girl, quiet except to point out a murderer, is really chilling.

60 for 60, week 3: A Study in Scarlet

Date: 2012-09-05 11:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] livejournal.livejournal.com
User [livejournal.com profile] spacemutineer referenced to your post from 60 for 60, week 3: A Study in Scarlet (http://dispatch-box.livejournal.com/196384.html) saying: [...] by Initiation [...]

Date: 2012-09-08 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] musamihi.livejournal.com
Still loving these! I can't wait for more. :) It's nice to have all the hints there without having everything explicitly spelled out - it gives everything an ominous tone that's terribly appropriate, considering. (And, Moran shout-out! Woo!)

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