Thank you! I really wanted to work in the contradiction between his earlier, harsher words and his concluding, comforting "Well, well, my dear sir, don't look so depressed." - but 60 words didn't allow me enough room to get there, and even the 100 word extended-version wasn't quite enough to work in the actual second quote. I'm glad that some of the idea came through even without it. :-)
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Date: 2013-05-07 02:34 am (UTC)