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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then be inspired to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

This week my featured form is the kennings poem.

Young Writers gives this definition:

A Kenning is a two word phrase describing an object, often using a metaphor. A Kennings poem is a riddle made up of several lines of kennings to describe something or someone. [It] consists of several stanzas of two describing words. It can be made up of any number of Kennings.


Here is my example poem. I will not mention who I am describing:


Tobacco-smoker
Practical-joker
Cupboard-lurker
Tidiness-shirker

Indoor-shooter
Urchin-recruiter
Surprise-springer
Chaos-bringer

Drugs-injector
Noise-projector
Danger-attractor
Peace-subtractor

Satan’s-spawn
Hades-tenant
And most of all:
[censored because ladies present]




As always, this is simply something to consider for the future. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, blackout poetry, call and response, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, englyn, epigram, epulaeryu, fable, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, palindrome poetry, pantoum, poem cycle, renga, riddle, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triolet, tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by Charles Augustus Milverton in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Re: A clerihew

Date: 2015-09-20 08:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Snort!!!! Well I'm not buying Agatha a butter-dish just 'cause some pipefitter is poaching HER eggs!

Limerick: Cap’n Marble-Heart

Date: 2015-09-20 08:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
A pirate immune to all tears,
Destroyer of lives and careers –
Till a heartbroken dame
Avenged her man’s name
And sank him, to everyone’s cheers.

kennings attempt

Date: 2015-09-20 11:26 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Imprudence collector
Imprudence brandisher
Imprudence profiteer

AND

Imprudence investigator
Imprudence assuager
Imprudence foresaker?

Re: A clerihew

Date: 2015-09-20 11:28 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Hahaha! Agatha dodged a bullet in probably more ways than one!

Re: kennings attempt

Date: 2015-09-20 03:26 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yes. I was struck by how Holmes reassures Watson that the letters were imprudent, nothing else.

221B

Date: 2015-09-20 04:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Mistaken maid
Sorrowing widow
Executed
Blackmailer

Re: Limerick: Cap’n Marble-Heart

Date: 2015-09-20 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Arr, tis a satisfyin' ending all around, me hearty.

(Perfect timing for "Talk Like a Pirate Day" yesterday - CAM is the most piratical of the Holmes villains.)

Re: Limerick: Cap’n Marble-Heart

Date: 2015-09-20 05:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
Very nice - Sullivan would have loved it as a libretto. The sank is such a good touch.

Re: Not quite a Kennings Poem...

Date: 2015-09-20 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
Thank you for doing this great idea so well.

Re: Written earlier...Agatha's view of romance

Date: 2015-09-20 05:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
That's really good. Especially the last couplet, of course.

Re: Limerick: Cap’n Marble-Heart

Date: 2015-09-20 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Couldn't resist linking CAM to yesterday's Talk Like a Pirate Day. He IS the most piratey of the Holmes baddies. Arr, the wench be packin' heat!

Re: Not quite a Kennings Poem...

Date: 2015-09-20 05:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
She should publish that and see if she can make Holmes blush from afar by icily titling it "Escott."

RE: A clerihew

Date: 2015-09-20 07:07 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Ah yes...I am sure that must be on Watson's list...somewhere near the solar system.

RE: Limerick: Cap’n Marble-Heart

Date: 2015-09-20 07:10 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Comeuppance...
ACD has a few villains with no apparent redeeming features
Neatly done:-)

RE: Re: Not quite a Kennings Poem...

Date: 2015-09-20 07:12 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you very much...you are digging up some interesting verse patterns

And I doubt Agatha was kept in mind when publishing the tale

RE: Re: Not quite a Kennings Poem...

Date: 2015-09-20 07:13 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you:-)

RE: Re: Not quite a Kennings Poem...

Date: 2015-09-20 07:14 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
She should
Not well-treated, at all.
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you
I think she was under estimated
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you, I think she would have made a good ally:-)

RE: kennings attempt

Date: 2015-09-20 07:17 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Neat contrasts
Well put together:-)

RE: 221B

Date: 2015-09-20 07:19 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Hello, travelling lady:-)
Nice summing up
Execution sounds more appropriate than murder, somehow...

Re: kennings attempt

Date: 2015-09-20 09:42 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you! It's quite the workout for my brain. I'm so impressed with what you and the other members of the community are able to produce, even after only two weeks. It really bowls me over so I feel compelled to at least TRY, even though I'm not a poet.

RE: Re: kennings attempt

Date: 2015-09-20 10:12 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Delighted that you have joined in:-)
And it is quite a good brain work out...like a code or a puzzle to crack:-)

The poetry of Mrs H

Date: 2015-09-20 10:18 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Ah yes, ma'am...I believe he did not appraise (apprise?) you of cupboard lurking tendencies on signing of tenancy...your modest poetic restraint is entirely admirable.

Re: Limerick: Cap’n Marble-Heart

Date: 2015-09-21 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
A smiling face with a heart of marble - oh yes, irredeemable. (Though I did like the Granada Watson deducing his childhood and early life through looking at his house.)

RE: Re: Not quite a Kennings Poem...

Date: 2015-09-22 08:18 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
*sigh*
(And I was doing so well...)
Yes, absolutely...Mrs Hudson has been digging up some fine verse patterns...which you really ought to try out more often, by the way...you won't reach her standard, of course, but we applaud effort.

RE: Re: The poetry of Mrs H

Date: 2015-09-22 08:23 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you, ma'am
And may I say again, what marvellous verse forms you have dug up:-)

More gin, perhaps, while you mull the idea over?

Re: 221B

Date: 2015-09-27 12:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you - Six words is about all I can manage on my phone!

Re: 221B

Date: 2015-09-27 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you. I suspect many shared that thought.

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