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Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then be inspired to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

Inspired by the unfortunate Professor Presbury’s desire to recapture the past, I decided to investigate a poetry form used by this community before I arrived. And so this week my featured form is the clerihew.

Wikipedia gives this definition:

A clerihew is a whimsical, four-line biographical poem invented by Edmund Clerihew Bentley. The first line is the name of the poem's subject, usually a famous person put in an absurd light. The rhyme scheme is AABB, and the rhymes are often forced. The line length and metre are irregular.

A clerihew has the following properties:

It is biographical and usually whimsical, showing the subject from an unusual point of view; it mostly pokes fun at famous people;

It has four lines of irregular length and metre (for comic effect);

The rhyme structure is AABB; the subject matter and wording are often humorously contrived in order to achieve a rhyme, including the use of phrases in Latin, French and other non-English languages;

The first line contains, and may consist solely of, the subject's name. Bentley said that a true clerihew has to have the name "at the end of the first line", as the whole point was the skill in rhyming awkward names.



I realise many of you will already be greatly skilled at this form and so, as an extra challenge, why not try including some of your own portmanteau words—like Dr. Watson and his ‘Camford’?



Here is my example poem dedicated to someone, who though not famous, is quite well-known around Baker Street:


The excellent Mrs. Turner:
When single a wage earner.
But my girls give suitors something to burn over.
When it comes to cooks, I get quite a turnover.




As always, this is simply something to consider for the future. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, Italian sonnet, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, palindrome poetry, pantoum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Creeping Man in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson
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Limerick

Date: 2016-01-24 08:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Old Presbury’s mad as a hare,
Mule-stubborn, and cross as a bear.
His search for lost youth
Only points to the truth:
Love makes monkeys of men, I declare.

A Limerick (of sorts)

Date: 2016-01-24 01:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
There once was a professor from Camford
Who bought all the rejuvenating products he could afford
But monkey glands it would seem
Though he took them by the ream
Only resulted in him being gored

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-01-24 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Sings: "The guy's only doing it for some doll"

Re: A clerihew

Date: 2016-01-24 01:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Who wants to be called Trevor?

Re: Clerihew: Roy

Date: 2016-01-24 01:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Brilliant last line!

Re: Written earlier...a pantoum

Date: 2016-01-24 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Lovely description of the two of them, beautifully written.

RE: Limerick

Date: 2016-01-24 02:39 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Nicely done
Excellent last line:-)

RE: A clerihew

Date: 2016-01-24 02:40 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Perhaps ACD was simply checking if readers were paying attention.

RE: Re: Clerihew: Roy

Date: 2016-01-24 02:40 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you very much:-)

RE: Re: Written earlier...a pantoum

Date: 2016-01-24 02:41 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you very much:-)

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-01-24 02:41 pm (UTC)

Re: A clerihew

Date: 2016-01-24 02:42 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Oh, the names! *smacks head*

RE: A Limerick (of sorts)

Date: 2016-01-24 02:42 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Such a foolish thing to do.

Re: Clerihew: Roy

Date: 2016-01-24 02:43 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
You are shining today! Very well done. And I'm glad that Roy finally got some attention. After all, he's the whole point, yes?

Re: Written earlier...a pantoum

Date: 2016-01-24 02:45 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Nice use of whetstone from the beginning of the story. Really lovely. It's always convenient, of course.

Re: A Limerick (of sorts)

Date: 2016-01-24 02:45 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yeah, foolish pursuit of the unattainable.

Re: A Limerick (of sorts)

Date: 2016-01-24 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Definitely not to be recommended.

Re: A Limerick (of sorts)

Date: 2016-01-24 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Exactly - really, it was never going to end happily.

attempt clerihew by the not greatly skilled

Date: 2016-01-24 03:38 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Staid, elderly Professor Presbury
Made the whole house--from dog to daughter--worry
Monkey business seems beneath a famous prof
But a man's gotta do...to keep stiff and toff

RE: Re: A clerihew

Date: 2016-01-24 04:01 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Well, if we give him the benefit of the doubt 50% of the time...
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