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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then be inspired to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

This week, inspired by Mr. Holmes’s remark to the Doctor: "Cut out the poetry, Watson", my featured form is micropoetry.

Micropoetry.com gives this definition:

Be creative! Poetry with limited characters. 140 with Twitter. 160 with SMS :-)

Micropoetry.com was set up to encourage people to write creatively within the small amount of text space provided in social networks platforms like twitter and on our mobile phone SMS. We aim to demonstrate that although your message may be limited in the amount of characters that you can use; your actual message content is unlimited in the amount of feelings, ideas, and emotions that you can express.


Yes…

Well, I am not quite sure what all this means. But Mrs. Frankles assured me that as long as all the letters, punctuation marks, symbols and spaces in my poem added up to 160 characters or less, it would be fine.


And so here is my example poem—160 characters, including spaces:


Purples, violets, lemons & limes
I’ve repainted 221B 43 times.
I am blue.
(My language too.)
Red, grape, burgundy, claret
Mr. Holmes can find himself another garret.




As always, this is simply something to consider for the future. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Retired Colourman in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson
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Limerick

Date: 2016-03-13 08:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
A house too run-down to be quaint
That nonetheless reeks of fresh paint.
The smell it conceals
From a gas-pipe reveals
How he dealt with his faithless wife’s plaint.

Micropoem

Date: 2016-03-13 09:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
The smell of fresh paint
So very familiar
Covers that of gas
Destroys the family

Playing chess
A favourite game
Tactics as always excelling
Opponent vanquished

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-03-13 10:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
However he viewed his wife, this was a terrible revenge.

Re: Micro poetry: A moment of empathy.

Date: 2016-03-13 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Although it doesn't happen often ;)

Re: Written earlier: A Terzanelle

Date: 2016-03-13 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Watson, you are quite right, poetry does have its place, as you have ably proved.

Re: Written earlier: Charm

Date: 2016-03-13 01:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Nice one - and testament to Watson's abilities.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-03-13 02:27 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Well done. Yeah, that murder-room is just creepy.

Re: Micropoem

Date: 2016-03-13 02:28 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Nice inclusion of the chess motif. It's a great metaphor along with the paint.

Re: Written earlier: Charm

Date: 2016-03-13 02:30 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Aw yeah! Go Watson!

Re: Written earlier: A Terzanelle

Date: 2016-03-13 02:31 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Wow! You definitely made the case for poetry--and Watson. Holmes should be more appreciative.

Re: Micropoem

Date: 2016-03-13 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you. The chess idea seemed to fit well.

Your poem, Mrs H

Date: 2016-03-13 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I presume, madam, you tried the old trick of painting the door the same as the walls so he couldn't find his way in?

RE: Limerick

Date: 2016-03-13 05:28 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Particularly like the first line:-)

RE: Micropoem

Date: 2016-03-13 05:28 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Nicely sinister:-)

RE: Your poem, Mrs H

Date: 2016-03-13 05:30 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Excellent poem Mrs H, and excellent notion, small hobbit:-p

RE: Re: Written earlier: Charm

Date: 2016-03-13 05:33 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you:-)

RE: Re: Written earlier: Charm

Date: 2016-03-13 05:34 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Yep...deserves cheering on:-)

RE: Re: Written earlier: A Terzanelle

Date: 2016-03-13 05:35 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
*Watson tips his hat*

RE: Re: Written earlier: A Terzanelle

Date: 2016-03-13 05:36 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you...and yes Holmes should:-)

Re: Micropoem

Date: 2016-03-13 06:16 pm (UTC)

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-03-13 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Yes, very noirish.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-03-13 06:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Wonder if this story inspired some other creepy murder mysteries.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-03-13 06:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks. "Quaint" is one thing, but "squalor" is quite another.

Re: Micro poetry: A moment of empathy.

Date: 2016-03-13 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
I thought of that line of Holmes as his own small contribution of humour (I can hear Watson giving a very silent groan).
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