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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, is this week’s suggested poem to read—a suggestion inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poem, and perhaps it may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.


Horse in the Cage

by Stanley Plumly


Note from Rachel: This sad, surreal poem remembers a man, now dead, whose abuse of a horse highlighted his own brokenness and desperation. The final few lines seem to capture something about Mr. Straker’s confused last moments, as he falls into a tragedy of his own making.


Thank you so much to Rachel. And here is my suggested form to revisit this week: the elfje. (The link will take you back to a previous poetry page.)


But you do not have to use that form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by Silver Blaze in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!



Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Limerick

Date: 2016-05-01 07:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
A colt gone before the big day.
A dog that had nothing to say,
Plus a bill for a dress
That shouted “excess”
Cleared it up – killer blazing the way.

An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 11:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com




Bay
Silver Blaze
The fastest horse
I’ve bet on him
Winning

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-01 11:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
That last line is excellent!

Re: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 11:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Yes. I wonder how she'll learn about Straker's death?

Re: Sort of an elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 11:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Always Watson!

RE: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-01 11:15 am (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Neatly summarised...excellent last line

RE: Re: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 11:17 am (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Good point...the news really hit the headlines, but perhaps she did not know of his other identity.

RE: Sort of an elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 11:17 am (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Lovely mix of meaning:-)

RE: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 11:18 am (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
The expectations of many, I suspect:-)

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-01 11:50 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Love the last line. Well done.

Re: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 11:52 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very true and sad that his desire to give her something material led to his death and pain for others, like Fitzroy.

Re: Sort of an elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 11:53 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Nice. Go Watson!

Re: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 11:53 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I like the eagerness. The anticipation of everyone who's ever bet on anything.

elfje x 3

Date: 2016-05-01 11:57 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
mutton
curried stewed
a sinister dish
in sheep’s clothing hidden
wolf!

curry
spicy rich
conceals many sins
girl’s cooking, yesterday’s meat
greed!

danger!
cooked stewed
don’t put a
gift sheep in the
mouth!

RE: Re: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 12:05 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Yes...and is there more than this to his past?
Tended to think of her as a villain...but she may be completely unaware of circumstance

RE: Re: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 12:06 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Yes...worse consequences than he envisaged

RE: elfje x 3

Date: 2016-05-01 12:21 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Very nice
Love the word play involved:-)

Re: elfje x 3

Date: 2016-05-01 12:30 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you! So glad that you like them!

RE: elfje x 3

Date: 2016-05-01 12:37 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Re: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 02:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Most certainly.

Re: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 02:05 pm (UTC)

Re: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you. The doubts until the very end.

Re: elfje x 3

Date: 2016-05-01 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I do like the various uses of sheep - and not just in the curry.

Re: elfje x 3

Date: 2016-05-01 02:09 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-01 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
Ouch and well done. Altogether very neat.

Re: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
This is a well thought glimpse, both solid and poignant.

Re: elfje x 3

Date: 2016-05-01 06:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
All well written; the first and third are spot on. I suspect Straker was more into lust than greed.

Re: elfje x 3

Date: 2016-05-01 06:11 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you and hee, hee. You're right. The greed was a means to the end.

RE: Re: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 06:27 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you...she may well be an innocent party in this

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-01 06:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks! I was a little leery about that last line and hoped it would have the right effect - and apparently it did.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-01 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'd had my doubts that the last line was lucid enough on its own. Looks like it was!

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-01 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Those were the two main clues in the story - a dog that did nothing, and a bill for an expensive dress.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-01 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks! I wasn't completely sure that that last line was clear enough to tie everything together. Looks like it was.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-01 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks! Looks like that last line works as well as I'd hoped (it seemed a little clunky when I wrote it).

Re: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Succinct and profound.

Re: Sort of an elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Nice use of the word!

Re: elfje x 3

Date: 2016-05-01 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Not the only ovine abused by this business - think of those poor lamed sheep.

RE: Re: An Elfje

Date: 2016-05-01 08:14 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you
Really chuffed at your comment:-)

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