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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, are this week’s suggested poems to read—suggestions inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poems, and perhaps they may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.


Fragment

by Angelina Weld Grimke


Let No Charitable Hope

by Elinor Wylie


Note from Rachel: This first poem fragment was written by a woman of mixed race, the daughter of a white American abolitionist and an African American father. The poem reflects her pain and struggle. The second poem adopts similar themes, but has a quietly victorious conclusion – I’d like to imagine that the lovely young girl in Dr. Watson’s story will still be able to find happiness as she grows older despite the terrible injustices she will undoubtedly face.




Thank you so much to Rachel. And here is my suggested form to revisit this week: the sedoka. (The link will take you back to a previous poetry page.)


But you do not have to use that form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Yellow Face in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!



Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson
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Limerick

Date: 2016-05-15 08:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Strange face at the window. But whose?
Her past life? He wants her to choose.
But Norbury’s lesson,
Has got Holmes confessin’
That pride is a good face to lose.
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Your bootlaces, like
your pipe and watch, Watson, show
individuality.

Indeed, the fingers
that tied, untied me, Holmes, were
remarkably singular.

Re: Also a sedoka

Date: 2016-05-15 11:49 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very nice take on Holmes' attitude toward exercise.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-15 11:50 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Excellent use of 'face' at the end and tying the girl to Holmes' 'failure'

Re: A sedoka

Date: 2016-05-15 11:50 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very nice. A good look at the girl from two perspectives.

Rachel's poems

Date: 2016-05-15 11:53 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I like them. Nice to hear women's voices.

Sedoka

Date: 2016-05-15 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Over-confident
The detective goes awry
And sees plots which are not there

In future Watson
Will recall one single word
For Holmes to take greater care

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-15 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Yes, Holmes, you failed to take into account all the evidence.

Re: A sedoka

Date: 2016-05-15 02:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I like the comparison.

Re: Also a sedoka

Date: 2016-05-15 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Maybe the exercise should have been brisker.

RE: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-15 02:36 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Neat use of face, and portrays Holmes rueful acknowledgement well:-)

RE: A sedoka

Date: 2016-05-15 02:36 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Neat comparison

RE: Re: Also a sedoka

Date: 2016-05-15 02:37 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you
And...yes

RE: Re: Also a sedoka

Date: 2016-05-15 02:37 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you:-)

RE: Re: Also a sedoka

Date: 2016-05-15 02:39 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Perhaps so:-)

RE: Sedoka

Date: 2016-05-15 02:40 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Neat summing up and rhming

Re: Sedoka

Date: 2016-05-15 03:20 pm (UTC)

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-15 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Two people lost face here - Lucy and Holmes - and everyone is happier for it.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-15 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
I was thrilled when I realised I could use the term "lose face" for Holmes and tie it back to Lucy losing HER "face" and gaining a family.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-05-15 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
One can be blinded by too much pessimism as well as optimism, it seems.
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