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Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, are this week’s suggested poems to read—suggestions inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poems, and perhaps they may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.


Song of the Galley-Slaves

by Rudyard Kipling


Note from Rachel: This poem reminded me of James Armitage’s story.



If Feeling Isn’t In It

by John Brehm


Note from Rachel: Mr. Holmes owes a lot to Victor Trevor’s dog, doesn’t he? I like this celebration of simple loyalty and open emotion. I also like the line about how dogs instinctively bite ‘bringers of bad news’ – that fits Mr. Holmes all too well :)


Thank you so much to Rachel. (These young people and their typed faces. It will never catch on.) And here is my suggested form to revisit this week: the lanturne. (The link will take you back to a previous poetry page.)


But you do not have to use that form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The ‘Gloria Scott’ in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!



Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson
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lanture x 3

Date: 2016-05-22 07:30 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Fire-
flies dance
in tea leaves,
remind me of
you

Cup
of sweet
Darjeeling
reminds me of
you

Strife
at home
turns men's thoughts
to the sea and
tea

Clerihew

Date: 2016-05-22 07:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Old Justice Trevor
Had one tie he could not sever
The game-birds’ bill came due one day
For the J.P. could not escape J.A.

RE: Clerihew

Date: 2016-05-22 09:56 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very nice. I like the rhyming and the play with the initials.

Rachel's poems

Date: 2016-05-22 09:59 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I like the rhythm of the first one. It's like the rowing.
And the second is sweet. And true (for dog lovers).

lanturne for ACD

Date: 2016-05-22 10:19 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thanks
for the
detective!
Happy Birthday
Doyle!

RE: A lanturne

Date: 2016-05-22 10:23 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Hee, hee. Very nice and a pun too.

I was surprised that the dog was a bull terrier. They're usually friendly. Too friendly. They're so strong they can barrel over you. Maybe it thought Holmes' ankle was a toy.

Re: lanture x 3

Date: 2016-05-22 12:47 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you! Yes, I tinkered with 'points/bits of light' I wanted the energy of the light to represent his deductions and his mind. Making clear that which is obscure.

Re: lanturne for ACD

Date: 2016-05-22 12:49 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I didn't know except for Triple Ransom's post. Make sure you don't mention...hercock smones...in your card. Ask him if he's found a nice medium :)

Re: A lanturne

Date: 2016-05-22 12:52 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Some people like certain breeds of dogs and my brother-in-law likes bull terriers. He's had many. They are like pig-dogs. So strong, pure muscle. Little battering rams.

Yeah, and I would think (cynically) that in a place like Oxbridge (or wherever) Trevor's position and his nice home would ease the way for him socially. Right? I scratched my head at why he was friendless too. Maybe Doyle was thinking of someone.

lanturne

Date: 2016-05-22 12:58 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Words,
his. Changed
a path, course.
"This is your line."
Mine.

221B

Date: 2016-05-22 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Curious introduction
Unusual friendship
Serendipitous
Bite

RE: lanture x 3

Date: 2016-05-22 04:31 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Lovely work, wistful and entirely apt:-)

RE: Clerihew

Date: 2016-05-22 04:32 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Nice choice of words and use of initials:-)

RE: A lanturne

Date: 2016-05-22 04:33 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Very nice:-)

RE: lanturne for ACD

Date: 2016-05-22 04:33 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Gosh...a birthday:-)
Nicely done:-)

RE: lanturne

Date: 2016-05-22 04:34 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Neatly done:-)

RE: 221B

Date: 2016-05-22 04:35 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Summed up beautifully:-)

Re: lanture x 3

Date: 2016-05-22 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
I can feel Trevor's longing in these.

Re: A lanturne

Date: 2016-05-22 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
In the last round my 60-word (http://sherlock60.livejournal.com/497831.html) implied that the bull-terrier could sense that Holmes was a dog-killer, and made a preemptive attack.

Re: 221B

Date: 2016-05-22 04:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
And everything bearing down on that last word, very much like a terrier's bite.
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