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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.


There is no poem from Rachel this week but instead, here is a new poetry form to try: line messaging.


Shadow Poetry gives this definition:

Line Messaging is a poetry form created by Angel Favazza is a poetic form wherein the poet utilizes the last line of each stanza to help represent an overall idea. So if the last line of each stanza is read together (separately from the poem) it will have an independent message or be a poem all on its own.



Here is my example poem:



A blackguard underneath
Says the witness in Blackheath.
A trifling woman made of fluff.


Finding an answer is hard.
Maybe the victory belongs to Lestrade,
Strangely enough.


Luckily Oldacre will seal his own fate
Because this case to date
Is really quite tough.





But you do not have to use this form, if you do not wish to. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, florette, found poetry, free verse, ghazal, haiku, In Memoriam stanza, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, line messaging, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, musette, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Norwood Builder in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-08 08:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Mr. Jonas Oldacre
Loved and lost, and vowed to go break her
To get her son hanged by mistake was his aim
But one thumbprint too many ruined the frame

Line Messaging

Date: 2017-01-08 12:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
The boredom of Sherlock Holmes
When distraction from criminal activity is thin
Could be better assuaged by considering
The cost of gin

At least lighting a fire in another house
Where smouldering hay needs to be smothered
Is better than in his rooms when the furniture
Must be re-covered

For then the damages are caused elsewhere
And at home not even a poker is bent
And the tenants do not need to be troubled
By an increase in rent

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-08 12:42 pm (UTC)

Re: On the Necessity of Fire Drills 3

Date: 2017-01-08 12:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I'm glad to see that by the third attempt Holmes had learnt his lesson (for now). Excellent poetic descriptions of Havoc by Holmes.
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From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
How brightly
love’s spritely
memory doth
burn.

A chapter
hereafter
never lost to
yore.

Others rust
gather dust
but this, one doth
husband.

I recall
bits and all
as lucidly
as you do.

Faint whisper
clear, crisper,
it echoes of
yore.

The lot to marry
Must e’er carry
(and be carried)
‘cross love’s final
bridge.



Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-08 12:47 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Ha, ha! Very smart last line.

Re: On the Necessity of Fire Drills 3

Date: 2017-01-08 12:50 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Oh, wow! Epic. Yes, fire drills should be obligatory 221b. Glad Holmes finally conceded to Watson's concerns.

Re: Line Messaging

Date: 2017-01-08 12:52 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very nice. I liked 'smouldering hay needs to be smothered.'

Re: Line Messaging

Date: 2017-01-08 12:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you. I was pleased when that line occurred to me.
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Also inspired by your post about your course. I have been thinking about marriage this week and it lead to a dark place.
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I can follow your thinking, although it's at a slight distance from my course.

RE: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-08 01:34 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Great last line in particular:-)

RE: Re: On the Necessity of Fire Drills 3

Date: 2017-01-08 01:34 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Yep, took him a while though:-p
Thank you:-)

RE: Re: On the Necessity of Fire Drills 3

Date: 2017-01-08 01:35 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Not sure he will remember the lesson in 12 months time...

RE: Line Messaging

Date: 2017-01-08 01:35 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Excellent use of the form:-)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
This works really well...nice word choice:-)

Re: Line Messaging

Date: 2017-01-08 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I think you should write it in on the course evaluation as suggested topics for the next round (spouse disposal). Might make discussion a bit more lively.

Mrs. Hudson's poem

Date: 2017-01-08 04:52 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Well done! Love the line message.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-08 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
As Holmes said in the BBC Radio version of NORW, a true artist knows when to stop.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-08 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
And a very dumb last move by Oldacre.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-08 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
He's like a writer who can't help underlining and emphasizing all the bad guys in the story, instead of letting the reader figure it out.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-08 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Ugh. One of the scariest Holmes villains of all time for female readers - because while most women don't ever run into criminal masterminds or blackmailers, too many DO have to deal with entitled men who try to ruin their lives for the crime of rejecting them.

Re: On the Necessity of Fire Drills 3

Date: 2017-01-08 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
I can just hear the beleaguered men of the firewatch.

"Let's go, boys. Hop to it!"
"Oh blimey, 221b again. Must be Christmas."
"Well, the old woman's got some lovely gingerbread, it'll be worth the trip."

Re: Line Messaging

Date: 2017-01-08 05:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Ha ha! Nicely done.
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Brilliant! Extra points for the pun on "yore."

Re: Line Messaging

Date: 2017-01-08 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you very much :)

Re: Line Messaging

Date: 2017-01-08 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Haha! I do want to pass this course, you know. Although I would certainly appreciate some livelier discussion.
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you. Ending on 'your' as I originally wanted proved tougher than anticipated.

RE: Re: On the Necessity of Fire Drills 3

Date: 2017-01-08 08:17 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you:-)
Actually...your fire drill mention brought these to mind...I should have said:-p

RE: Re: On the Necessity of Fire Drills 3

Date: 2017-01-08 08:18 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
What a lovely thought:-)

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