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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, is this week’s suggested poem to read—a suggestion inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poem, and perhaps it may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.



Amaryllis

By Edwin Arlington Robinson




Thank you so much to Rachel. And I thought we could also have a go at a new poetry form: the shadorma.

Robert Lee Brewer on Writer’s Digest gives this definition:

I recently discovered a poetic form called shadorma… that I had no record of in my two poetic form handbooks… Shadorma is a Spanish 6-line syllabic poem of 3/5/3/3/7/5 syllable lines respectively. Simple as that. Also, you can link multiple shadorma (shadormas? shadormae?)...



Here is my example:


Playing cards:
I like Gin Rummy.
But here in
Baker Street,
The most appropriate game
Is always Patience.




But you do not have to use that form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blitz poem, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, compound word verse, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, echo verse, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epistle, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, florette, found poetry, free verse, ghazal, haiku, hay(na)ku, In Memoriam stanza, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, lies, limerick, line messaging, list poem, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, musette, nonsense verse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, rhyming alliterisen, riddle, rime couée, rispetto, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, shadorma, sonnet, stream of consciousness, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by Shoscombe Old Place in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson
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Clerihew

Date: 2017-04-30 07:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Lady Beatrice Falder
Her brother concealed and walled her
To hide her condition and finish his sales –
For neither do dead women tell any tales

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-04-30 10:44 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Ooo! Very noirish ending! I like it! edited because nourish and noirish are not the same autocorrect!
Edited Date: 2017-04-30 12:35 pm (UTC)

Re: Two unrelated Shadormas

Date: 2017-04-30 10:45 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
The first one is about the dog, no? I feel so bad for the dog.

And yes, once a gambler always a gambler, in everything. And he did have a fabulous stroke of 'luck.'

shadorma x 3

Date: 2017-04-30 10:54 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Saint Pancras
his ashes and dust
carried thus
laid to rest
from Augustine’s story-chest
at great Pope’s behest

Saint Pancras
death most treasonous
evil’s pus
ends searches
between rail and old churches,
besmirches.

Saint Pancras
bears holy witness
to squareness
given import
the microscope lens does sort
truth from sport

Mrs. Hudson's poem

Date: 2017-04-30 10:59 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
The patience joke will never get old--and never will be need for it, sadly!

shadorma (in Spanish)

Date: 2017-04-30 11:18 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
El triste
príncipe corre
como el
viento
para olvidarse de
su reina

[the sad Prince runs like the wind to forget his queen]
Edited Date: 2017-04-30 11:19 am (UTC)

Shadorma

Date: 2017-04-30 12:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
St Pancras
Murdered policeman
Blobs of glue
Found in cap
Belonging to the accused
Picture-frame maker

Re: shadorma x 3

Date: 2017-04-30 12:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Most impressive.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-04-30 12:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Poor Lady Beatrice - but maybe better she didn't know what her brother would do.

Re: Two unrelated Shadormas

Date: 2017-04-30 12:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Poor dog.

One could say Sir Robert, like his toast, was jammy.

Re: shadorma (in Spanish)

Date: 2017-04-30 12:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Nice idea - and very cleverly expressed.

Re: Shadorma

Date: 2017-04-30 12:36 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Great minds think alike. I like your summary.

Re: shadorma x 3

Date: 2017-04-30 12:39 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I had to listen to the pronunciation 10 times and then I still couldn't figure out what Saint Pancras rhymes with! So I finally just said fuck it and gave it my best shot. It sounded so strange.

Re: shadorma x 3

Date: 2017-04-30 12:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Yeah - treasonous is probably closest. Poor old St Pancras, believed to be the patron saint of railway stations ;)
Edited Date: 2017-04-30 12:42 pm (UTC)

Re: Shadorma

Date: 2017-04-30 12:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you - some things seem better designed for certain poetic forms than others.

Re: shadorma x 3

Date: 2017-04-30 12:46 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I read the story on Wikipedia and the bringing of the bones by Augustine reminded me of the first Cadfael book where they go to Wales to get St. Winifred's bones.

Re: shadorma (in Spanish)

Date: 2017-04-30 12:47 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Really the dog and the horse are the saddest part of all of this. They'll miss her more than her brother will.

Re: shadorma x 3

Date: 2017-04-30 12:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Yes of course, a very similar idea.

RE: Clerihew

Date: 2017-04-30 03:06 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Quite sinister

RE: Re: Two unrelated Shadormas

Date: 2017-04-30 03:08 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Yes, the dog has a bad time of it
And yes...defying the natural laws of comeuppance

RE: Re: Two unrelated Shadormas

Date: 2017-04-30 03:09 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Yep, poor dog:-(
And one could, particularly if one associated with Frankles for long enough:-p
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