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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, is this week’s suggested poem to read—a suggestion inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poem, and perhaps it may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.



Carrion Comfort

By Gerard Manley Hopkins




Thank you so much to Rachel - a wonderful choice.


Here is also a new poetry form to try: the tricube.


Robert Lee Brewer on Writer’s Digest gives this definition:

...the tricube is a newer form and relatively unknown. Plus, it’s fun and easy to learn. This mathematical poem was introduced by Phillip Larrea.

Here are the rules of tricubes:

Each line contains three syllables.
Each stanza contains three lines.
Each poem contains three stanzas.

So we’re talking cubes in mathematical terms (to the third power). No rules for rhymes, meter, etc. Just three, three, and three.



Here is my example, inspired by the Doctor's story - specifically those... vivid... descriptions of the lady who shares my profession:


A charming,
and clever
detective…

A thick-necked,
hairy-lipped
hack writer.

Poem by
a ‘buxom
landlady’.




But you do not have to use this form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, barzelletta, beeswing, blackout poetry, blitz poem, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, compound word verse, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, débat, décima, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, echo verse, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, enuig, epigram, epistle, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, florette, found poetry, free verse, ghazal, haiku, hay(na)ku, In Memoriam stanza, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, lies, limerick, line messaging, list poem, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, musette, nonsense verse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quatern, quintilla, renga, rhyming alliterisen, riddle, rimas dissolutas, rime couée, rispetto, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, shadorma, sonnet, stream of consciousness, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, tricube, trine, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Veiled Lodger in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Clerihew

Date: 2017-06-25 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Mrs. Eugenia Ronder
Though wed, of another was fonder
The big cat was framed for the death of her man
But her beau was no lion – turned coward, and ran

RE: Clerihew

Date: 2017-06-25 07:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
And no more needs to be said - story in a nutshell.

Mrs. Hudson

Date: 2017-06-25 02:27 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
As I recall the good doctor has also called buildings 'buxom' or something to that effect. One would think he has something on the brain, perhaps b00bs!

Re: A tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 02:27 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yeah, let's give this circus a pass, shall we? Don't sit too close to the lion's act!

Re: Veil...written earlier

Date: 2017-06-25 02:35 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

Rachel's poem

Date: 2017-06-25 02:41 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I like the internal rhyme and alliteration of this one very much!

tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 02:43 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Prussian blue
bitter brew
almond sigh

Red bottle
of thought ill
will, not Thy

Brown cork plug
remains snug
by the by

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-06-25 02:44 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Nice summary for a sad story without any real mystery.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-06-25 04:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
I like the challenge of summarising the story in four little lines.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-06-25 04:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks - the final line has to carry most of the weight.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-06-25 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
A sad story about the human condition - like CARD a tale of love lost, a sordid affair, tragedy. But Holmes may have kept one death from this story's toll with his final admonition, unlike his helpless lament in CARD.

Re: A tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
"We're going to the circus, children!"
"Why, Mummy? We didn't do anything wrong!"

Re: tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 04:19 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Re: A tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Yes, so much going on underneath, unseen but still present.

Re: Veil...written earlier

Date: 2017-06-25 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Absolutely lovely.

Re: tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Very neat, with all the rhymes - and such a good description of the item.

Tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 04:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
A lighthouse
Far from home
Secluded

Cormorant
Trained bird
Spills secrets

An MP
Much to lose
Should take care

Re: Tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 04:45 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Ooo! Very nice. I like 'spilled secrets' especially.

Re: Tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 04:52 pm (UTC)

RE: Clerihew

Date: 2017-06-25 05:00 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Very well told:-)

RE: Re: A tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 05:00 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Indeed.

RE: Re: A tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 05:01 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Yep, not all glitter and stardust.

RE: Re: A tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 05:01 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Precisely

RE: Re: A tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 05:01 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
A sad situation.

RE: Re: Veil...written earlier

Date: 2017-06-25 05:02 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you:-)

RE: Re: Veil...written earlier

Date: 2017-06-25 05:02 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you, it is an odd pattern with rhymes in places which slow things down.

RE: Re: Veil...written earlier

Date: 2017-06-25 05:03 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you.

RE: tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 05:04 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Very well done...I, too, like the first verse in particular.

RE: Tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 05:04 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Great choice of subject, and well executed.

Re: tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 05:16 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Re: tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 05:17 pm (UTC)

Re: Tricube

Date: 2017-06-25 05:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you - the three seemed to suit the form rather well.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-06-25 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thank you.

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