The Hound of the Baskerville: Mystery

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Canon Story: The Hound of the Baskerville
Title: Mystery
Author: Mafief
Rating: G
Warnings: none
Summary: Modified blitz poem summarizing the story


Mystery of a visitor
Mystery of the Baskervilles
Baskervilles' frightening hound
Baskervilles' new heir
Heir, beware!
Heir’s boot is lost
Lost three threads
Lost, but is...
Is this supernatural?
Is this a scheme of men?
Men of evil purposes
Men unknown on the moor
Moor hiding secrets
Moor secrets found
Found by Watson
Found by Holmes
Holmes endangers heir
Holmes!

Comments

[okapi1895.livejournal.com]

Well done. Very cleverly constructed. All the connecting words were brilliantly selected and everything flows so naturally. Brava!

[debriswoman]

Very effective...particularly like the last line:-)

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

What a very clever summary. Great use of words.

[scfrankles.livejournal.com]

I like this a lot ^__^ Echoing Okapi - it's all so elegantly put together. Great use of the form.

My favourite lines:

Mystery of a visitor/ Mystery of the Baskervilles

Lost three threads/ Lost, but is.../ Is this supernatural?/ Is this a scheme of men?

And of course...

Holmes endangers heir/ Holmes! ^____^

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Thank you.
I might have been yelling at the character a bit. :)

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! :) It's a fun style.

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much.

I don't like that Holmes endangered his client and let that out with the last line. :)