The Problem of Thor Bridge: Transformation

[ennui-enigma.livejournal.com]

Canon: The Problem of Thor Bridge
Title: Transformation
Author: ennui_enigma
Rating: PG
Warnings: none

The tropical sun lighted upon her shining hair creating a halo round her face. Skin, bronzed by the sunlight, and with her white dress, she looked like an angel.

Dark storm clouds blocked the sun and echoed the jealous rage of a woman jilted. Dressed in red, cheeks flushed, and hatred blazing from her eyes, she looked like a devil.

Comments

[spacemutineer.livejournal.com]

Oooh, this is excellent. I love the atmosphere and the visual detailing -- so much compacted into just 60 words! And I believe this may be your first 60 here -- what a great way to start!

On that note, welcome! Thanks for jumping in with us! I'm the mod here, so if there's anything you need, let me know. :)

thanks

[ennui-enigma.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I was hoping it wasn't too late to post since I missed Sunday. I love the idea here! I've had so much fun. Already have my 60 word fic for this coming Sunday prepared!

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

You've captured the contrast really well. And in just a few words shown the result of her ill treatment.

[ennui-enigma.livejournal.com]

You brightened my day with your kind review :) Thanks.

[debriswoman]

Nice contrasts and descriptions. Neatly done:-)
(Mrs P)

[ennui-enigma.livejournal.com]

Wow! you "get around" the Internet:P Thanks for the encouragement. I composed it in my head while walking my dog.

[debriswoman]

My pleasure:-) I usually find that's a productive time, too.

[tweedisgood.livejournal.com]

I like the way you have conjured up Maria with these two stark and contrasting visuals. But as this, I assume, in the eyes of her husband, seems like she could tell an equally contrasting tale about him, no?

[ennui-enigma.livejournal.com]

Even more so, I'm sure!