The Noble Bachelor: The Swan on the Serpentine

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Canon Story: The Noble Bachelor
Title: The Swan on the Serpentine (part of The Ocelot Tales)
Author: thesmallhobbit
Rating: G

The little man seemed frantic, obsessed; he had found a wedding dress floating on our lake.  He is sure the wearer must be under the water.

The tall man looks at the surface and knows that the bride is elsewhere.  I can tell by his stance that he does not just see, but he understands.

He glides but paddles underneath.

Comments

[firthivated.livejournal.com]

Beautiful imagery. Loved Holmes as the swan: his efforts inside looking effortless from the outside. Wonderful!!

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much. Even when Holmes doesn't appear to be physically doing much his brain is working hard.