The Noble Bachelor: Summons

[spacemutineer.livejournal.com]

Canon Story: The Noble Bachelor
Title: Summons
Author: spacemutineer
Rating: G
Author's Notes: Originates from Holmes' quote: "This looks like one of those unwelcome social summonses which call upon a man either to be bored or to lie."


The most unwelcome summons had already come, posted despite the fact the groom lived at my address to inform me in calligraphy on fine paper of an event I'd been dreading.

In the end, I was called upon both to be bored and to lie. I departed after an interminable ceremony and my required words.

"Mr. and Mrs. Watson, congratulations."

Comments

[ennui-enigma.livejournal.com]

Poor Holmes! A difficult invitation on multiple levels. Nicely written. Thanks!

[debriswoman]

I think, in this case, Holmes is the more worthy owner of the title "noble bachelor".

Nicely done:-)

[hisietari.livejournal.com]

It's tragic how the one summoning done by people who love him would hurt him on a level all the other events could never reach. Actually this is pretty chilling.

[firthivated.livejournal.com]

Pitch perfect and so sad.
Such a wealth of pain behind those few words,"Mr. and Mrs. Watson, congratulations."

[impulsereader.livejournal.com]

Oh, poor Holmes. :-(

Beautifully rendered misery, though. :-)

[bwblack.livejournal.com]

I love this. So well done. That is a hard invitation, indeed. And he has to go and he has to pretend he is pleased. That particular piece of mail would mean so many changes.

Wonder what Watson thought when he saw it come in the mail. Excited for his day or saddend for the changes, as well?

[spacemutineer.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, and thanks for reading!

[spacemutineer.livejournal.com]

Is it so noble to suffer in silence? Perhaps. He'll certainly keep the "bachelor" part of the title, regardless.

Thank you very much!

[spacemutineer.livejournal.com]

I doubt they knew how much it would hurt him, and certainly he wouldn't tell them.

Poor Holmes. And even more sympathy for him because I always love to torture him so in these 60s. :)

[spacemutineer.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I love seeing how much I can get into the 60 words. Such a tight word count means you have to leave a lot for the readers to infer -- another reason I love the game we've come up with here.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

[spacemutineer.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I do love to torture him a bit, poor guy.

[spacemutineer.livejournal.com]

Ooh, good question. I imagine Watson would have been both excited and anxious. He's gaining a wife, but he's giving up the life and home he's loved so much. There's a story to be told in there somewhere... you've given me a nice plot bunny for later.

Thank you for your lovely kind words! They mean a lot to me. :)

[hisietari.livejournal.com]

How he must hate Sundays by now. =P