A Case of Identity: Will not be Persuaded

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Canon Story: A Case of Identity
Title: Will not be Persuaded
Author: trillsabells
Rating: PG


“No,” she said, shaking her head.

No, it couldn’t… he wouldn’t… no…

“Madam, I beg you to believe me-“

“Sir,” she raised her voice and jumped to her feet. “I beg you to take your lies away from me. Hosmer promised me. The things he said, the things we shared and what we did-“ her voice broke. “No. Please leave.”

Comments

[debriswoman]

Oh goodness, that hints at an even darker element to the relationship with her disguised stepfather.

Very disturbing.

Very well done:-)

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

There are none so blind as those that will not (or dare not) see.

[chess-ka.livejournal.com]

Oooh, I like that this suggests to something darker than what we were told. I always think this is a pretty grim story, really.

[ennui-enigma.livejournal.com]

You've also captured her rather independent, stubborn spirit to cling to what she wants to believe...under the circumstances it might be rather easier to believe the lie...

Well written!

[hisietari.livejournal.com]

Euh, I might take a while to get that one out of my head again... there's been various interpretations in this direction, and it's certainly a very dark, but none the less probable one to go for.

[opal grey (from livejournal.com)]

That whole relationship never sat right with me-- you've captured exactly why here.

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