Apr. 10th, 2016

[identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Title: A Study in Scarlet, Chapters 8-14: The Space Between
Author: gardnerhill               
Word Count: 60
Rating: G
Warning: None
Summary: Some judicious editing can save more than the reader’s interest.
                                                                                       
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“Half of your offering is taken up with that Mormon tale!” Holmes tossed the Beeton’s to the night-stand. “A few sentences would have sufficed to inform the reader of Hope’s motive.”

“People like romantic stories.”

Holmes nestled back into my unclothed embrace. “Watson, I would advise you to leave out irrelevant romantic asides in your future chronicles.”

“As you wish.”
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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com
This week, the canon story we’re looking at is A Study in Scarlet (part 2, chapters 1-7), and the chosen topic is Cabs and Cabbies.

Discussion continues... )
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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, are this week’s suggested poems to read—suggestions inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poems, and perhaps they may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.


Critics and Connoisseurs

by Marianne Moore


Note from Rachel: "Critics and Connoisseurs" seems to me to encapsulate Mr. Holmes's early attitude toward Scotland Yard. I imagine him comparing the inspectors to animals he observed during his college days—a territorial swan that Mr. Holmes could only prod into movement by feeding it a steady stream of morsels; an ant colony that patrolled in circles stubbornly waving sticks. "I have seen ambition without understanding in a variety of forms," the poet scoffs. I would love to hear your thoughts on Mr. Holmes's relationship with the official police and their interactions in these early years. The first stanza of this poem also serendipitously uses the image of a pup (perhaps Dr. Watson's elusive bull pup?) reaching for scraps at the dinner table. In contrast to the later stanzas, which describe Mr. Holmes's exasperation with the self-conscious parading of ambition, he finds himself oddly charmed by the ungainly, unself-conscious poetry of a new domestic life with Dr. Watson.


Fame is a Bee

by Emily Dickinson


Note from Rachel: The story ends with Dr. Watson vowing that someday he will ensure that Mr. Holmes gets the credit he deserves from the public. We know that Dr. Watson succeeds beyond his wildest dreams, but Mr. Holmes has a vexed relationship with the Doctor’s writings from here on out, relying on them for publicity and employment but also disparaging their style and at times uncomfortable with the notoriety they bring. But in the end, he sees Dr. Watson as his biographer and Boswell, and would be lost without him. I thought Emily Dickinson’s short reflection might fit this Holmesian theme.




And to finish, my suggested form to revisit this week is the englyn. (The link will take you back to a previous poetry page.)



But you do not have to use that form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by A Study in Scarlet in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!



Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson
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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com
Canon Story: A Study in Scarlet, Pt. 2
Title: Divided By a (fairly) Common Language
Author: [livejournal.com profile] scfrankles
Rating: G
Author's Notes: “This is a queer old book I picked up at a stall yesterday—De Jure inter Gentes—published in Latin at Liege in the Lowlands, in 1642.” [Watson] answered, “...you must make yourself contented by the consciousness of success, like the Roman miser—“ ‘Populus me sibilat, at mihi plaudo Ipse domi simul ac nummos contemplar in arca.’ ” It’s all Greek to me...


“...and so I dropped everything and travelled from Colorado to consult you.”

Watson nodded. “Carpe diem!”

“Yes…”

Mr. Fisher turned to Holmes.

“I realise you may not be able to help me but…”

”Nil desperandum!” Holmes beamed at his client.

Mr. Fisher smiled back somewhat tentatively.

He hadn’t been expecting the British accent to be quite this difficult to understand.
[identity profile] castiron.livejournal.com
Canon Story: A Study in Scarlet, Part 2
Title: Genealogist
Author: Castiron
Rating: G
Warnings: none
Author's Notes: The 1860 Federal Census in Utah was happening in June and July.


My project to find all the descendants of immigrant Andrew Ferrier has overall gone well, but one line is giving me trouble: his great-grandson John Ferrier. John's on the 1860 census in Utah with his presumed daughter Lucy, but afterwards they both vanish from the record.

When I travel to Salt Lake City for research, maybe I'll find something.
[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Canon Story: A Study in Scarlet
Title: An Extraordinary Mind (the serialisation of the Private Journal of Dr Watson)
Author:thesmallhobbit
Rating: G

It would seem I am sharing my lodgings with a man possessing an extraordinary mind.  His deductions have a unique quality to them, for I am sure no other man would come to the same conclusions as he does.  I just wish he would make use of his own towel when he wishes to tie criminals’ legs, rather than mine.
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Canon Story: A Study in Scarlet, Pt. 2
Title: Twenty-Eight
Author: [livejournal.com profile] grrlpup
Rating: G

There's no soap gets char out of a ceiling. I had plenty else to do that day-- or maybe it was the prospect of twenty-odd more batches of whitewash put the devil in my tongue. "Needn't bother," I muttered, holding the pail for Sal. "Not when..."

She scowled. "Hush!" Kept daubing.

Glad we don't sleep in that house, is all.

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