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Canon Story: The Final Problem
Title: Discussion x 5
Author: [livejournal.com profile] spacemutineer
Rating: G
Author's Note: I'm still travelling, currently in my fifth city in a week (!), so I'm way behind on commenting on all the terrific posts everyone's made. Sorry, guys! I've got some serious catching up to do. But all that time on the train did come to one good thing: this week I have not one 60, but five (!!), a compressed version of Holmes' and Watson's argument after Moriarty escapes.

We sat in the Strasbourg salle-à-manger arguing the question for half an hour, but the same night we had resumed our journey and were well on our way to Geneva.

"Why such a normally stolid, practical man is entertaining such a patently foolhardy notion is beyond me."
"If it is foolhardy for me to continue with you, it is even more foolhardy for you to forge ahead alone."
"My dear Watson, your companionship is appreciated, but, friend, I am asking you to leave."
"And I am refusing, friend. Now what?"
***
"You cannot remain with me. Surely you see it is impossible."
"It is not only possible, it is the only thing that can happen."
"You must be reasonable. Think of your practice. Think of your wife."
"My wife knows the man she married. She would expect no less of me. I'm not leaving you, Holmes. This discussion is over."
"Watson. Please."
***
"Please what? Please leave you alone to be hunted down by a vengeful maniac? If you believe I would even consider that, you don't know your man."
"Quite the contrary. I know him all too well. Well enough to know he would freely risk his own skin to preserve mine, something I cannot allow."
"It is not your decision to make."
***
"If that decision is not mine, then what choice have I?"
"You may choose our next lodgings."
"This is no joke, John! We are discussing life and death here. Your very life and death. You must take this threat seriously."
"I am taking it seriously, which is why I won't leave you. It is your very life and death too."
***
"Watson, pray listen to reason. If I still hold any sway with you, if you yet trust my judgement at all, you will be on the next train home."
"I trust your judgement, Holmes, but not about your safety. On that subject, I never have. It will take much more than just your words to force me from your side."

Date: 2013-04-07 06:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hisietari.livejournal.com
Oh wow, this is intense! The five-times-sixty structure makes it all the more so. Every part could stand on its own, yet together they're quite overwhelming. It's great to see Watson's intellect and wit, and Holmes's deep concern for him. Great stuff!

Date: 2013-04-07 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hisietari.livejournal.com
Good thing it's just one week and not three years. ;D

Date: 2013-04-07 09:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trillsabells.livejournal.com
I love how each one could stand alone as a little snapshot into their conversation but together they show how desperately Holmes cares about Watson. Especially when he called him John!

And the last line *heart breaks with foreshadowing*

Date: 2013-04-07 06:42 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
These 5 build up beautifully, each adding a little more to the whole.

Very nice work:-)

Date: 2013-04-07 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
The immovable object versus the irresistable force.

Sunday, 7 April 2013

Date: 2013-04-07 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] livejournal.livejournal.com
User [livejournal.com profile] thisprettywren referenced to your post from Sunday, 7 April 2013 (http://holmesian-news.livejournal.com/279644.html) saying: [...] by (Holmes/Watson | R | BBC) Drabbles, Ficlets, & 221b's Discussion x 5 [...]

Date: 2013-04-07 09:20 pm (UTC)
methylviolet10b: a variety of different pocketwatches (Default)
From: [personal profile] methylviolet10b
I love all of these individually, and even more so when taken together. I'm accepting this as head!canon for the argument. :-D

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