The Resident Patient: Percy Trevelyan

[scfrankles.livejournal.com]

Canon Story: The Resident Patient
Author: scfrankles
Rating: PG




Poor Percy Trevelyan
Was embroiled in a plot Machiavellian.
His sponsor wasn’t liked by his gang
So they let him go hang.

Comments

[sabrinaphynn.livejournal.com]

Hee. This made me giggle.

[scfrankles.livejournal.com]

I'm so pleased that it did ^_^

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Poor Trevelyan, no idea what he'd let himself in for. I like this!

[scfrankles.livejournal.com]

Thanks ^^ At least Trevelyan did get something out of the situation - he'd built up a good practice in the years before this happened. Still, not a pleasant experience ^^"

[debriswoman]

Nicely matched words:-)

[scfrankles.livejournal.com]

Thanks ^^ Oh, I was pleased to be able to rhyme "Trevelyan" ^^

[vaysh]

Trevelyan // Machiavellian is a very inspired rhyme. I love how you recounted the basic plot of the story in four lines.

[scfrankles.livejournal.com]

Must admit I came up with "rebellion" and "Orwellian" on my own, and then looked online to see if I could find anything else. "Machiavellian" was listed as a rhyme for "rebellion" - it works so much better than the other two words ^^

[mundungus42.livejournal.com]

The coup de grace in the last line is devilishly funny! And my hat is off to you for rhyming Trevelyan with Machiavellian! Well done!!

[scfrankles.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much ^^ (Though there is a rhyming website somewhere that deserves most of the praise for "Machiavellian" ^_^)