The Resident Patient: Moffat

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Canon Story: The Resident Patient
Author: thesmallhobbit
Rating: G


Gang member Moffat
Had thought he would profit
From robbing a bank
Until Sutton committed offence very rank.

Comments

[debriswoman]

The clerihews are working really well:-)

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Yes they are. I think it was a good idea of Frankles to introduce some variety, whilst keeping the main stream.

[debriswoman]

The minute I turn my back, you all start rhyming:-p

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

You would, of course, be very welcome to join in.

Your contributions in the last round showed that all sorts of things were possible.

[debriswoman]

Thanks:-)
Not inspired at the moment...

[scfrankles.livejournal.com]

I really like "Moffat/profit" ^_^ (And doesn't "gang member Moffat" suggest "Little Miss Muffet"..? ^^)

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I do not need any further ideas for anything at the moment ;)

[vaysh]

Great rhymes - I love that you choose Moffat for the clerihew. :)

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you. As with most of my clerihews, it's pure desperation.

[mundungus42.livejournal.com]

Eeee! Hamlet homage! Brilliant!! And given that your chosen character shares a name with one of the creators of BBC Sherlock, I'm doubly tickled by your offering.

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Somehow I suspect Shakespeare was rather better at poetry than I am ;) And yes, the name appealled.

[mundungus42.livejournal.com]

Isn't it sad that Shakespeare never got to try his hand at Clerihews?