The Five Orange Pips: Captain James Calhoun

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Canon Story: The Five Orange Pips
Author: thesmallhobbit
Rating: G




Captain James Calhoun
Did not know that soon
He would meet his death at sea
Thus foiling the detective from 221B

Comments

[minervas-eule.livejournal.com]

*gg* great rhyming; who would have thought the "B" is so essential ;-)

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you. It comes in useful at times ;)

[scfrankles.livejournal.com]

"sea/221B" is a very neat rhyme ^^ (It has to be said that FIVE has a bit of a flat ending...)

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you. FIVE goes in with the "if you are a villain, never let ACD put you in a boat, you won't see land again" category.

[vaysh]

*lol* Only too true.

[debriswoman]

Very clever and neatly rhymed:-)

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much.

[vaysh]

I am in love with "death at sea" rhyming with "221B". Exceedingly clever. :)

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you. It all comes from trying to find the best way to kill Calhoun off.