The Valley of Fear (Part 1): Jonathan Wild

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Canon Story: The Valley of Fear (Part 1)
Author: thesmallhobbit
Rating: G




Jonathan Wild
Had society beguiled
His ill-gotten gains
Came from many another’s pains

Comments

[scfrankles.livejournal.com]

Really like "Wild/beguiled" ^^ And what an interesting choice of subject.

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you. It would appear that again we're skirting round the main characters.

re: Jonathan Wild

[vaysh]

Like scfrankles, I am intrigued by your choice of subject of all the many characters offered in the Valley of Fear. The man's history in four poignant lines. Wow.

Re: Jonathan Wild

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

As I said to frankles, it's not a story I like, so I was happy to choose a character who remained outside the main action. And thank you.

[debriswoman]

Nicely done
Particularly beguiled:-)

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I have to admit to being rather pleased at that one ;)