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Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then be inspired to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.


This week my featured form is one of my own devising: the 221B verselet.

This is a tribute to the 221B ficlet—a form of writing that some of Mr. Holmes’ admirers like to indulge in. (I do feel sorry for Mr. Holmes on occasion. They are on the whole charming girls but sometimes he has only to step out of the front door for a group of young ladies to surround him, furiously sketch him, and then stampede to the Post Office to post the pictures to their friends.)


My definition for the 221B verselet:

A poem four lines long—the first line having 2 words, the second line having 2 words, the third line having 1 word and the fourth line having 1 word, beginning with ‘b’.


So only six words in total. But you appreciate a bit of minimalism in your poetry writing when simultaneously having to cope with your tenant setting fire to the curtains.


Here is my example:


Treasure lost.
Treasure found:
Watson’s
Bride.




As always, this is simply something to consider for the future. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

acrostic poetry, clerihew, epigram, haiku, limerick, palindrome poetry, sedoka, sestina, sonnet, tanka, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triolet, tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Sign of Four in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Tanka

Date: 2015-02-01 01:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Toby took the route
That followed the trail of tar
First came a barrel
Afterwards the landing stage
The house of Mordecai Smith

Re: Tanka

Date: 2015-02-01 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
And I thought you had experience in all forms of short poetry ;) Thank you anyway.

Re: Tanka

Date: 2015-02-01 03:51 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Neatly done:-)

Re: Tanka

Date: 2015-02-01 05:15 pm (UTC)

Re: Tanka

Date: 2015-02-01 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mundungus42.livejournal.com
The Tanka is new to me, as well. Thank you for the introduction as well as the excellent example. Well done!

Re: Tanka

Date: 2015-02-01 09:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
There's a great selection of possibilities for short verse that I've recently become aware of and hope to make use of in the future.

Re: Tanka

Date: 2015-02-02 12:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tardisjournal.livejournal.com
I had to look up tankas as well. I'm learning so much about poetry from this community! Thank you (and Toby!) for making it so enjoyable.

Re: Tanka

Date: 2015-02-02 08:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
You aren't alone in that - it seems a great medium for expressing something in a few words. And thank you.

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