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Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then be inspired to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

This week my featured form is the ghazal.

poets.org gives this definition of a ghazal:

The ghazal is composed of a minimum of five couplets—and typically no more than fifteen—that are structurally, thematically, and emotionally autonomous. Each line of the poem must be of the same length, though meter is not imposed in English. The first couplet introduces a scheme, made up of a rhyme followed by a refrain. Subsequent couplets pick up the same scheme in the second line only, repeating the refrain and rhyming the second line with both lines of the first stanza. The final couplet usually includes the poet’s signature, referring to the author in the first or third person, and frequently including the poet’s own name or a derivation of its meaning.

Traditionally invoking melancholy, love, longing, and metaphysical questions, ghazals are often sung by Iranian, Indian, and Pakistani musicians.


You can find further information in this article by tiganusi on dA.


Here is my example poem:


My modest home once had quite magnificent drains.
Then Mr. Holmes became acquainted with my drains.

Sir, I asked you to take them out of the butter dish.
Tell me: how exactly did they end up in my drains?

Jones the plumber now gives me a special discount;
He has become exceedingly familiar with my drains.

Past midnight: Mr. Holmes has not yet come home.
That’s a shame. I did so want to discuss my drains.

So, if one were planning to brutally murder a tenant,
Could one dispose of the body in my— one’s drains?




As always, this is simply something to consider for the future. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, blackout poetry, call and response, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, epigram, epulaeryu, fable, ghazal, haiku, limerick, palindrome poetry, riddle, sedoka, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triolet, tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Crooked Man in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Re: A 221B verselet

Date: 2015-06-21 08:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
He has only himself to blame. I have attempted to find additional tenants, but the smell in 221B is quite sufficient to any suitable persons off. Mr Holmes continues to blame the drains, but it is noticeable on recent occasions the smell has only been present in his rooms.

Re: A 221B verselet

Date: 2015-06-21 12:46 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
A saint, Mrs Hudson.
You are a gin-enhanced saint.

Two 221bs

Date: 2015-06-21 08:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Locked door,
Dead Colonel
“David!”
Barclay.

Crooked Uriah,
Guilty conscience,
Apoplexy.
Biblical.

Re: Two 221bs

Date: 2015-06-21 08:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Clever use of the 221b - sums the situation up very well.
Edited Date: 2015-06-21 08:50 am (UTC)

Re: Two 221bs

Date: 2015-06-21 04:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks. I love being able to distill everything down to a roux of just the right few words.

Re: Two 221bs

Date: 2015-06-21 12:46 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Very clever:-)

Re: Two 221bs

Date: 2015-06-21 04:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks. I was pretty pleased when it came out myself!

Re: Two 221bs

Date: 2015-06-21 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Sums up the poor guy's sitch - and the colonel's comeuppance.

Limerick

Date: 2015-06-21 08:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
There once was a yellow canary
Who was starting to look quite wary
He had seen a mongoose
Which had only one purpose
And he had no wish to become confectionary

Re: Limerick

Date: 2015-06-21 12:47 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Was it a trained Canary?

Re: Limerick

Date: 2015-06-21 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Highly trained - although you wouldn't think so from the language it used at the mongoose.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2015-06-21 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you! *bows*

Your poem, Mrs H

Date: 2015-06-21 08:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I am sure it would be possible to dispose of a murdered tenant via the drains, but the smell could possibly be even worse. In fact, he could be more of a nuisance dead than he was alive.

Re: Your poem, Mrs H

Date: 2015-06-21 12:48 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
That thought may see you through tough times, ma'am.
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Re: Your poem, Mrs H

Date: 2015-06-21 05:34 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Forgive the anachronism, Mrs H but...
Group hug

Re: Your poem, Mrs H

Date: 2015-06-21 05:34 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
:-p

Re: Your poem, Mrs H

Date: 2015-06-21 07:45 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you:-)
Mrs H seemed so sad...:-p

Date: 2015-06-21 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rachelindeed.livejournal.com
I love your ghazal! Hilarious verging on the homicidal...

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