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Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then be inspired to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

This week my featured form is the beeswing.

I must admit I was not able to find a form that was suitable for this week’s story and so the beeswing is a tercet of my own invention.

Its definition:

A beeswing has three lines with a rhyme scheme of aaa. Any meter is permitted.

When writing the poem, you take the last word from the first line and the last word from the second line, and incorporate them both into the third line. The words can be exactly the same as they are in lines 1 & 2 or you can make them part of new words. Wordplay is heartily encouraged!



Here is my example poem, using ‘light’ and ‘night’ (and ‘fright’ for the end rhyming word in line 3):


Mr. Holmes, please be careful with candlelight
When you’re playing at ghosts on All Hallow’s night.
Your nightshirt alight gave us all quite a fright.



You do not have to keep closely to the original meaning as I have done. For example: ‘night’ could have become ‘knight’; ‘light’ could have become ‘plight’, ‘blight’ or ‘delight’!



But as always, this is simply something to consider for the future. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, blackout poetry, blues stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, englyn, epigram, epulaeryu, fable, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, palindrome poetry, pantoum, poem cycle, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triolet, tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Abbey Grange in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Re: A clerihew

Date: 2015-10-25 08:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Excellent use of the portly theme of this tale.

Re: A clerihew

Date: 2015-10-25 09:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I am very impressed by your ability to find a rhyme for decanter.

Although one should never throw drink containers around, even if at times one is very tempted to use an empty gin bottle.

Re: A clerihew

Date: 2015-10-25 11:41 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I second the kudos for rhyming decanter.

RE: A clerihew

Date: 2015-10-25 12:26 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
"A lot of bottle" deserves a mention, too:-p

RE: Re: A clerihew

Date: 2015-10-25 04:41 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
So you should be:-p

Limerick

Date: 2015-10-25 08:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
A grand country home. But inside
Drunk brutality, no place to hide.
Vox populi rules,
And once more, Holmes proves
To be firm on the murderer’s side.
Edited Date: 2015-10-25 08:47 am (UTC)

Re: Limerick

Date: 2015-10-25 09:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Quite - I wonder whether he'll come to regret the decision.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2015-10-25 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
A classic dilemma - follow the law, or do justice? And Holmes pretty much always observes the latter. (Possibly Holmes made that decision with Mr. Kratides' death in GREE, which might not have happened if he hadn't been waiting and waiting and waiting to get that police warrant...)

RE: Limerick

Date: 2015-10-25 12:26 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Neatly done
Not convinced a happy ending is in sight.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2015-10-25 04:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
No - but perhaps Holmes can alleviate a bit of the tragedy by helping a man escape the gallows. (In a Texas court, Brackenstall's death would be treated as a "he needed killing" defense.)

RE: Re: Limerick

Date: 2015-10-25 05:34 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
True enough
Interesting tidbit of Texan law.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2015-10-25 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Closest I've ever seen is the old-school chestnut:

Isabili, heres ago
Fortibus es en aro
Noces Mari Thebe trux
Votis in em pax o dux
.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2015-10-25 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
Thanks for a neat paced and shapely verse.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2015-10-25 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. It's a little like distilling a large pot of beef stock down to a small lump of demi-glace.
Edited Date: 2015-10-25 05:05 pm (UTC)
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debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you:-)
Yes...not clear cut.
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
What an excellent sidelight. Both the idea and the writing are so good!

Mouselet's poem

Date: 2015-10-25 09:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Inspector Hopkins is the best
As a police inspector he’s above the rest
His gentle hand, his honest eye
His sweet, sweet smile, which makes me sigh
And when he bends to find a crumb
I look upon his shapely ..

Fortunately we have grabbed the paper from Mouselet whilst she is still musing. Our apologies Mrs H.

RE: Mouselet's poem

Date: 2015-10-25 12:27 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Cold shower for Mouselet might be in order...

Re: Mouselet's poem

Date: 2015-10-25 02:03 pm (UTC)

Re: Mouselet's poem

Date: 2015-10-25 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Please, Mrs H, Mouselet really doesn't require any encouragement.

Your poem, Mrs H

Date: 2015-10-25 09:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I do hope you at least had the satisfaction of using a large bucket of water to put him out.

RE: Your poem, Mrs H

Date: 2015-10-25 12:28 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Keep the Holmes' fire burning, Mrs H?
Edited Date: 2015-10-25 12:29 pm (UTC)

RE: Re: Your poem, Mrs H

Date: 2015-10-25 04:42 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you kindly:-p

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