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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then be inspired to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

This week my featured form is ‘veiled language’: allegorical poetry and metaphorical poetry.

For allegorical poetry Your Dictionary gives this definition:

An allegory is a piece of art or literature, like a poem or story, in which people, things or happenings have a hidden or symbolic meaning.

It also gives many useful and specific examples—just follow the 'allegorical poetry' link above.


For metaphorical poetry it gives this definition:

A metaphor is a comparison between two things that replaces the word or name for one object with that of another. Unlike a simile that uses “like” or “as” (you shine like the sun!), a metaphor does not use these two words (a famous line from Romeo and Juliet has Romeo proclaiming “Juliet is the sun”). Metaphors are commonly used throughout all types of literature, but rarely to the extent that they are used in poetry.

Again, use the 'metaphorical poetry' link given above for many specific examples.



Here is my example poem:


Mr. Holmes is a calculating machine:
Logical deductions on display.
Dr. Watson is a sturdy typewriter:
So many adventures to portray.
And I am a humble pocket watch:
Because I get wound up every day.




As always, this is simply something to consider for the future. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, allegorical poetry, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, metaphorical poetry, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Veiled Lodger in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Limerick

Date: 2016-03-20 08:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
A woman unveils the case:
Infidelity, violence, disgrace.
A murder plot saw
A poor lion, catspaw –
When it backfired, she truly lost face.

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Date: 2016-03-20 10:45 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Good first and last puns.

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Date: 2016-03-20 12:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Like Frankles, I am impressed with the catspaw.

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Date: 2016-03-20 12:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I had to look up the word 'catspaw' based on Frankles' comment. Wow! Very neat.

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Date: 2016-03-20 03:37 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Lovely playing with words:-)

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Re: Not really allegorical or metaphorical…

Date: 2016-03-20 10:46 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I suppose it is sweet, Holmes' compassion and sheer listening to her tale.

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Date: 2016-03-20 12:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I suspect he was considerably more understanding than she had expected.
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Re: Leonardo...slightly metaphorical.

Date: 2016-03-20 10:44 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
All very true. I like the cage element. She really is left in an invisible cage.

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Date: 2016-03-20 12:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
One wonders whether, had things not gone so badly wrong, she would have been much better with Leonardo. A coward like that could easily turn into another bully.

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Date: 2016-03-20 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
Excellent! Thank you for giving us this great look at the case.

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The politician, the lighthouse and the cormorant

Date: 2016-03-20 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
To those who seek to destroy my papers
My concern for their reputation is scant
I shall be soon publishing details featuring
The politician, the lighthouse and the cormorant

Any further attempt to break into our premises
By use of a thief or similar man
Will result in my full disclosure of
The lighthouse, the cormorant and the politician

And when you see my words in print
You will have no cause or reason to grouse
For I have given sufficient warning regarding
The cormorant, the politician and the lighthouse
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From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very very nice. I see what you did there. That you rhymed cormorant deserves an award. *Applauds*
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
A very good idea, very well written, and the pace is just right. Thank you!
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From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Consider, if you will, the tale anew.
To proud but prideless eyes, the judgment 'death
From misadventure’s but a point of view.

What folly! Feign my regal claw, my breath,
My rage, and see a foreign king enslaved
display his grasp of native shibboleth!

What cruel beasts! What animals depraved!
The lash, the cage, the swords by which the lives,
Demise of loathsome two-legg’d swine were staved.

Revenge denied, their verdict mild deprives.
Far worse, my sentence: the condemned survives.
Edited Date: 2016-03-20 12:56 pm (UTC)

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From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
Really good! Thank you for this strong fic, with a very strong ending.

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