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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, is this week’s suggested poem to read—a suggestion inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poem, and perhaps it may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.



Yours

by Leo Marks



Note from Rachel: [note on the note from Mrs. Hudson: I have reworked Rachel’s personal comment to me, so any awkwardness of phrasing or vocabulary is mine.] This is a code poem, so it fits neatly with the opening chapters of Dr. Watson's story. However, the line in the poem, "death is merely a pause," does seem appropriate for the larger mystery too.


Thank you so much to Rachel. And here is my suggested form to revisit this week: riddle poems. (The link will take you back to a previous poetry page.)


But you do not have to use that form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Valley of Fear in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!



Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Clerihew

Date: 2016-06-12 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Professor Moriarty
Of crime had made an art. He
Was as famed among the crooked cusses
As … he was unknown by law (saving Holmes’ blushes).
Edited Date: 2016-06-12 07:12 am (UTC)

RE: Clerihew

Date: 2016-06-12 10:08 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
That was a funny part. You captured it well.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-06-13 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks. I do love that exchange, with Watson getting even for Holmes' rudeness.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-06-12 11:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Indeed - neat last line.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-06-13 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Had to work in the "blushes" even if it wasn't a perfect rhyme.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-06-13 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
The last line is a bit of fudge - not a perfect rhyme - but I couldn't resist throwing in Holmes' "blushes" comment.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-06-12 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
This elegant and creative clerihew is most enjoyable.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-06-13 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks! I was pretty chuffed when I got it worked out myself.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-06-19 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Heh, that line is a Crowning Moment of Awesome for Watson.

Re: A riddle

Date: 2016-06-12 11:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I fear we will never know!

Re: A riddle

Date: 2016-06-12 12:06 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yeah, one for the ages.

Re: A riddle

Date: 2016-06-12 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
Certainly a good poet! I love Occasionally rising up from hell/To claim my tenner at Camberwell.

RE: A riddle

Date: 2016-06-19 10:44 am (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Neat summing up of the mysterious Porlock:-)

riddle poem

Date: 2016-06-12 10:07 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I leave
a journey to Xanadu unfinished
and
a well-cooked breakfast untested.

Re: riddle poem

Date: 2016-06-12 11:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
The man from Porlock is back again.

Re: riddle poem

Date: 2016-06-12 12:06 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yes. Poor Coleridge and Mrs. Hudson, whose breakfast-making effort went unacknowledged or appreciated.

Re: riddle poem

Date: 2016-06-12 01:52 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Re: riddle poem

Date: 2016-06-12 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
Most excellent riddle. (I'm longing to tery it out on someone.)

Re: riddle poem

Date: 2016-06-12 05:27 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I'm flattered. Thank you.

Re: riddle poem

Date: 2016-06-19 11:09 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Riddle Poem

Date: 2016-06-12 11:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
My first is in criminal
And also in crime.
My second is in words
But the answer will not be found in time.
My third is in Doctor
Who assists with the dance.
My last is in Holmes,
MacDonald’s best chance.
What am I?

Edited Date: 2016-06-12 11:28 am (UTC)

Re: Riddle Poem

Date: 2016-06-12 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I hoped it would cause a bit of a problem.

Re: Riddle Poem

Date: 2016-06-12 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
It is indeed!

Re: Riddle Poem

Date: 2016-06-12 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
Bravo that frankles! And thesmallhobbit.
Edited Date: 2016-06-12 05:28 pm (UTC)

Re: Riddle Poem

Date: 2016-06-13 12:26 pm (UTC)

Re: Riddle Poem

Date: 2016-06-12 05:27 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Well done!

Re: Riddle Poem

Date: 2016-06-13 04:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
I got it I got it! C O D E.

Re: Riddle Poem

Date: 2016-06-13 12:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Yep, well done!

RE: Riddle Poem

Date: 2016-06-19 10:42 am (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Very neat version:-)

Re: Riddle Poem

Date: 2016-06-19 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

Date: 2016-06-12 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I hadn't realised "Yours" was a code poem - I really like the rhythm to it.

Date: 2016-06-12 05:28 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yes, I also liked it, even without the code.

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