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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

Mr. Holmes has popped by briefly to tell me the case is now in the latter stages and Rachel should be resuming her duties at Baker Street very soon. Excellent news—but I have of course coped perfectly well without her. And certainly did not forget myself so far as to embrace Mr. Holmes and weep on his shoulder.

So, in the meantime, here is another featured form to try: the In Memoriam stanza.

Encyclopaedia Britannica gives this definition:

...a quatrain in iambic tetrameter with a rhyme scheme of abba. The form was named for the pattern used by Alfred, Lord Tennyson in his poem In Memoriam...



Here is my example poem:


My kitchen’s state is now a sin,
Since Rachel went to combat crime.
Please save me from my life of grime!
Return, dear maid! And bring the gin!





But you do not have to use this form, if you do not wish to. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, florette, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, In Memoriam stanza, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Valley of Fear in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!



Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Limerick

Date: 2016-07-03 07:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
McMurdo is Edwards. The trail
Sends the Scowrers to scaffold or jail.
Douglas now in this land,
He escapes as he planned –
But dear me, Mr. Holmes, still you fail!

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-07-03 12:38 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I like the ending! Use of the Dear Me.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-07-03 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Couldn't resist - that is a distinguishing characteristic of this story (enough for Moffat and Gatiss to borrow it for BBC Sherlock).

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-07-03 05:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
Elegant, and what a great last line!

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-07-03 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
That "Dear me" is so arresting - a distinguishing flourish in an otherwise rather tepid novel - that I needed to use it.

RE: Limerick

Date: 2016-07-03 06:27 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Nice word choice:-)

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-07-04 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks. That "Dear me" is so chilling.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-07-04 06:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Yep. That "Dear me" was so chilling.

Re: An In Memoriam stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 05:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
Yes, indeed. A well written and moving epitaph.

Re: An In Memoriam stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Poor guy - the one criminal he couldn't outwit.

Re: An In Memoriam stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Caught up in something which even he didn't realise how big it was.

Date: 2016-07-03 12:39 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very good summing up of the ending.

In Memoriam stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 12:52 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
A hero felled by evil wind.
A life of daring swept away.
A story’s pawn denied a stay.
A villain's hand ensures his end.

Re: In Memoriam stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 01:41 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Re: In Memoriam stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 05:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
Bravo for this very good and moving verse.

Re: In Memoriam stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 06:00 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Re: In Memoriam stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 06:02 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yeah, you know for such a clever guy, it is kind of a shame that he ended up being a felled pawn in someone else's.

Re: In Memoriam stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Poor man, did he drop his guard a little?

Re: In Memoriam stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 08:19 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Maybe he thought he was safe on a boat. He obviously hadn't read any of Watson's other tales.

Re: In Memoriam stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 08:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Quite - worst possible means of transport.

In Memoriam Stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 03:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
And Moriarty gives his name
To Sherlock Holmes who starts to think
Of ways to meet him at the brink
And thus begins the final game

Re: In Memoriam Stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 05:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
This is a fine sidelight on the story. Each line is strong, the last one particularly so.

Re: In Memoriam Stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you very much.

Re: In Memoriam Stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
There is only one way to go!

Re: In Memoriam Stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

Re: In Memoriam Stanza

Date: 2016-07-03 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you very much.

Your poem, Mrs H

Date: 2016-07-03 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I presume the absence of the gin is the real problem, madam.

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