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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, is this week’s suggested poem to read—a suggestion inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poem, and perhaps it may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.



Escape

by Fombona Rufino Blanco

[Translated from the original Spanish]


Note from Rachel: The long-suffering Miss Alice must often have dreamed of escape.




Thank you so much to Rachel. And here is my suggested form to revisit this week: doggerel. (The link takes you back to a previous poetry page.)


But you do not have to use that form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, florette, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, In Memoriam stanza, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle



Please leave all your poems inspired by The Copper Beeches in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!



Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Clerihew

Date: 2016-07-24 07:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Mr. Joseph Rucastle
In another time would be called a***hole
He bullied his daughter for cash; she resisted
But the dress and short hair didn’t work; beau persisted

RE: Clerihew

Date: 2016-07-24 10:08 am (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Unusual rhyming, but entirely apt for the subject:-)

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-07-24 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
So many of the stories hinge on women's financial precariousness.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-07-24 10:42 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yeah, not a nice guy. And I guess the rhyme is apt.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-07-24 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
I did have to spare Mrs. Hudson's blushes, but for some people certain blunt words are extremely apt.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-07-24 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Miss Alice picked her young man well.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-07-24 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Ugh, yeah. Exactly how many of the ACD stories feature some terrible man trying to take advantage of Victorian women's financial precariousness?

Re: A piece of doggerel

Date: 2016-07-24 12:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Had she known what deeds would follow
She might have given it a second thought

Re: A piece of doggerel

Date: 2016-07-24 05:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
What a fine pup! That last line! And I love your using wrought, too.

doggerall

Date: 2016-07-24 10:30 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
A snow-white muzzled terrier
Whose aide with pills did bury her.
An Airedale true who met his end
By falling into lion’s den.
An evil test of infant’s fate
el pobre Carlo’s stiffened gait.
A long-haired, lop-eared mongrel queer
Whose nose detective’s course did steer.
The swift Pompey who also led
the way in wake of brougham’s tread.
Twas scents that drove poor Roy half-wild,
of man and ape, unreconciled.
A Shoscombe breed was cast away
when mistress’s role was man’s to play.
A stable-guard when mute abet
a scoundrel’s scheme to pay his debt.
The massive mastiff starved, unleashed
his rage upon two-legged beast.
Of all, the canine most renowned
is Dartmoor’s phantom glowing hound.

The morals of these yarns may be
to man’s best friend collectively:
beware of outstretched hands that feed,
of trails where scents and gents may lead;
to bark or not, your choice to make,
though always clue, ‘tis ne’er mistake;
And whene’er Watson draws his gun,
there’s nothing left to do but run!

Re: doggerall

Date: 2016-07-24 12:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
So often the dog has an unwilling part to play. And definitely safest to run!

Re: doggerall

Date: 2016-07-24 12:41 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yes. Test subject or clue or villain's accomplice or scent-tracker.

Re: doggerall

Date: 2016-07-24 03:29 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! I found a list of the dogs on the internet so that helped.

RE: doggerall

Date: 2016-07-24 02:25 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Nicely done:-)

Re: doggerall

Date: 2016-07-24 03:27 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you! I do hope your block passes and you come back and show us how it's done.

RE: Re: doggerall

Date: 2016-07-24 03:35 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Kind of you:-)
I am sure things will settle and you do seem to be managing perfectly well without me till things do:-p
You write an elegant line:-)

Re: doggerall

Date: 2016-07-24 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
You are still missed though.

RE: Re: doggerall

Date: 2016-07-24 09:20 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Oh, I shall lurk and lurk, then suddenly come up with some utterly unexpected and stunning rhyme for the word " hound" and all will be well:-p

Re: doggerall

Date: 2016-07-24 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I'm glad to hear it :)

Re: doggerall

Date: 2016-07-24 06:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
This is indeed excellent! Every line deserves quoting.

Re: doggerall

Date: 2016-07-24 07:49 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Oh wow! Thank you!

Re: doggerall

Date: 2016-07-24 10:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Holmes and Watson would have been up on half a dozen animal-cruelty charges for what happens to dogs in Canon.

Rachel's poem

Date: 2016-07-24 10:46 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very nice. I like the image of the wings unfolding broken and the line about the magnolia and vervain.

Re: Rachel's poem

Date: 2016-07-24 12:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Yes, the poem does fit Alice's longings well.

Doggerel

Date: 2016-07-24 12:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
The lady of the Copper Beeches,
A Mrs Rucastle, beseeches
The governess to wear a blue dress
And so Miss Violet Hunter
Who doesn’t wish to affront her
Finds herself in rather a mess

Re: Doggerel

Date: 2016-07-24 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Not what she'd hoped for!

Re: Doggerel

Date: 2016-07-24 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

Re: Doggerel

Date: 2016-07-24 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Lots of money! Just one little, tiny catch...

Re: Doggerel

Date: 2016-07-25 08:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Such a minor thing ...

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