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Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, is this week’s suggested poem to read—a suggestion inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poem, and perhaps it may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.



The Great Black Hound Upstairs

by Paul Goodman



Thank you so much to Rachel. And here is my suggested form to revisit this week: call and response. (The link takes you back to a previous poetry page.)


But you do not have to use that form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, florette, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, In Memoriam stanza, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Hound of the Baskervilles in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Clerihew

Date: 2016-09-04 07:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Sir Charles Baskerville
Was elderly, kind, and ill
He walked in the alley to take the night air
But ran till his heart burst from what found him there

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Date: 2016-09-04 09:27 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very nice. I like that you're mixing up the clerihew and the limericks this go round. I just watched the Granada version last night and this is a nice summary of the opening scene.

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Date: 2016-09-04 11:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Excellent summation by clerihew.

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Country doctor, troubled, wary
Came from the moor and did not tarry
Came from the moor, dark and dreary
Came from the moor, to town.

Country doctor, came to the city
Came with stick and spaniel, did he
Came with a story, grim and gritty
“There’s on the moor, a hound.”

Country doctor came to London
Came from the moor, yes, that’s where he come from
“What shall I do? Oh, help me someone!
There’s on the moor, a hound!”

Country doctor knocked on the door, he
Knocked on the door of 221B
“Oh, what shall I do with young sir Henry?
There’s on the moor, a hound!”

Call and Response

Date: 2016-09-04 11:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Come quick, Holmes, the room’s on fire

Calm down, Watson, it’s not that dire

This obnoxious smell is making me choke

It’s only a little tobacco smoke

The air in here is really thick

Open the window, that’ll do the trick

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Date: 2016-09-04 12:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I love that scene. I think your poem should be put to music.

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Date: 2016-09-04 03:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] debriswoman
I suppose the alternative to locking the door is a smoke screen...:-)

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Date: 2016-09-04 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Nice, but does need a coda after that last line:
"I'll explain my complaint with your head and this brick."
Edited Date: 2016-09-04 05:22 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2016-09-04 06:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
A good summary of a frequent scene. One of these days the room will be on fire...

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Date: 2016-09-04 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Poor pup. Run, kid, before you get into this any deeper!

Date: 2016-09-04 12:54 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Hee, hee. Very nice. I like the last lines especially.
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From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Lovely contrast, and revisiting of both tales. And yes, the two last words truly are the ones to capture the imagination.

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