ext_1620665: knight on horseback (Default)
[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative (though not quite so delightful this week) and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, are this week’s suggested poems to read—suggestions inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poems, and perhaps they may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.



An Ancient Gesture

by Edna St. Vincent Millay


Note from Rachel: This poem expresses, for me, some of Mrs. Hudson’s experience (and by extension, Dr. Watson’s), in learning that the hero’s suffering was feigned while their own was all too real.




A Fixed Idea

by Amy Lowell


Note from Rachel: Mr. Holmes seems determined to catch his villains at any cost, and almost eager to cut the tie of friendship that holds him back from total immersion into combat with these devils. Of late he has been melancholy, too -- missing the days when he shared these rooms with the good doctor, I do believe. His friend's brief visits and occasional shared cases only make the solitude worse to return to once they are over. He speaks more and more of a name, one particular enemy; he calls him the Napoleon of Crime. Mrs. Hudson and I worry for him, terribly. One cannot help but wonder what strange thoughts are in his heart.



Thank you so much to Rachel. (Yes, these are anxious times at Baker Street...) And here is my suggested form to revisit this week: the epulaeryu. (The link takes you back to a previous poetry page.)

But you do not have to use that form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, florette, found poetry, free verse, ghazal, haiku, In Memoriam stanza, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, musette, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Dying Detective in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Clerihew

Date: 2016-12-11 08:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Mister Culverton Smith
His nephew murdered forthwith
That meddler Holmes got too close. Set a trap
With a toxic surprise. But on HIM it went snap!

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-12-11 12:32 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
love the trap and snap and smith did make the cartoon villain's mistake of explaining his whole scheme right before he almost won.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-12-11 06:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
"I am this close to being an epitaph and what does he do?"
"He starts monologuing."
"He starts monologuing!"

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-12-11 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
The classic villain's mistake of thinking they are cleverer than anyone else and discovering they aren't.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-12-11 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Someone clearly hasn't read the "When I Am Imperial Overlord" website because Rule One is DO NOT TELL THE HERO YOUR PLAN.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-12-11 06:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
See, the SMART villains do their deeds and avoid showboating.

RE: Clerihew

Date: 2016-12-11 02:37 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Yep...tripped up neatly:-)

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-12-11 06:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Darn that Victorian Villain penchant for bragging the whole evil plan to your heroic adversary.

RE: Re: Clerihew

Date: 2016-12-11 11:39 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
And for using a slow acting complicated murder weapon in order to allow for such bragging.
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
thrust into a Savage feast
invisible pest
helps itself until it pops
divides and conquers
host, meal are no more,
sinister
guest!
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you! I did a bit of reading and this bacteria doesn’t need human host to reproduce, so it's actually a dead end for it to jump to a mammal host. Sort of eating itself out of house and home.

epulaeryu

Date: 2016-12-11 01:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
A small plate of sweet biscuits
A glass of claret
Sufficient for sustenance
Energy giving
Until a foray
To Simpson’s
Yay!

RE: epulaeryu

Date: 2016-12-11 01:35 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I love the final exclamation. Very nice! Reminds me of your Brownies.

Re: epulaeryu

Date: 2016-12-11 01:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you!

In the case of the Brownies, more this:
Chocolate ice cream sundae
Ice cream candy shop
Vanilla ice cream sundae
Or brownie sundae
Frankie and Benny's
Delicious
Sweets

RE: Re: epulaeryu

Date: 2016-12-11 02:40 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Lovely! Love the play on brownie.

Re: epulaeryu

Date: 2016-12-11 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you :D

RE: epulaeryu

Date: 2016-12-11 02:38 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Oh, that's lovely:-)

Re: epulaeryu

Date: 2016-12-11 03:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you very much.

Re: epulaeryu

Date: 2016-12-11 03:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you - I'm glad you liked it.

Re: epulaeryu

Date: 2016-12-11 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Well I think Dr. Watson and Mrs. Hudson will have a thing or two to say about that Simpson's trip.

Re: epulaeryu

Date: 2016-12-11 07:03 pm (UTC)

Re: A sort of epulaeryu...

Date: 2016-12-11 01:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
A reasonable suggestion Watson, but I'd go out and leave Holmes at home.

RE: A sort of epulaeryu...

Date: 2016-12-11 02:40 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very nice! Unfortunately not an idea that will occur to Holmes.

RE: A sort of epulaeryu...

Date: 2016-12-11 02:40 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Neatly done:-)
Holmes needs to think about what he has done:-p
While the rest of the household are dining out

Re: A sort of epulaeryu...

Date: 2016-12-11 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
And I have just the recipe for that humble pie, too.

Profile

sherlock60: (Default)
Sherlock Holmes: 60 for 60

July 2020

S M T W T F S
   1 234
567891011
12131415161718
19202122232425
262728293031 

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Mar. 4th, 2026 07:21 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios