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Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, is this week’s suggested poem to read—a suggestion inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poem, and perhaps it may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.




The Sadness of Clothes

by Emily Fragos



Note from Rachel: Mrs. Cubitt outlived her initial despair and spent many years in the house she had shared with her husband, surrounded by memories. This poem seemed true to her grief, courage, and loss. (After all, our good Queen Victoria has had her husband's clothes laid out for him every morning, though he's been dead for years. She chooses to act as though he might one day walk back through the door and put them on again.)



Thank you so much to Rachel. And here is my suggested form to revisit this week: the circular poem. (The link takes you back to a previous poetry page.)

But you do not have to use that form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, florette, found poetry, free verse, ghazal, haiku, In Memoriam stanza, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, line messaging, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, musette, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Dancing Men in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!



Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-15 09:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Poor Elsie Cubitt
Had peace, a home, a hub. It
Didn’t last, she lost them all
When men came dancing back to call

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-15 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
One of the saddest endings of a Canon tale. But at least the poor woman didn't share the fate of Mary Browner nee' Cushing (CARD).

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-15 01:45 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yeah, poor thing. The last line is beautiful, haunting. And I realize I've been pronouncing Cubitt wrong in my head [it's not cube-it]

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-15 01:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I've always said Cube-it.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-15 04:22 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I noticed that Brett in The Norwood Builder says Lestrayde. I think Lestrahde sounds nicer.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-15 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
It's definitely a LestrAID/LestrAHD thing. I think they used this pronunciation in Granada.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-15 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Another tragic ending - mystery solved, but the patient died.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-01-15 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
All of the men came dancing back, didn't they? And Elsie joins the list of Holmes clients whose shady past comes back to bite them.
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RE: Re: A plea to Holmes

Date: 2017-01-15 02:15 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you:-)

Re: A plea to Holmes

Date: 2017-01-15 01:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yeah, you do get the same sense as The Five Orange Pips, that Holmes tarried a bit too long.

RE: Re: A plea to Holmes

Date: 2017-01-15 02:15 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Yes, he just did not sense the urgency.

RE: Re: A plea to Holmes

Date: 2017-01-15 06:29 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
There are:-(

Re: A plea to Holmes

Date: 2017-01-15 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Two words, Holmes: Five. Pips. Get a move on, death is waiting!

RE: Re: A plea to Holmes

Date: 2017-01-15 07:13 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Yep.

Circular poem

Date: 2017-01-15 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Holmes’ head in concentration sunk upon his breast
He resembles a strange bird: grey plumage and black crest
Then comes a client to distract him from every malodour
With tales of strange drawings which are starting to occur
This is no childish act, but a message left in code
And what they say is vital, though by means of a strange mode
We shall go tomorrow, for we’ve missed the final train
We’ll meet with Hilton Cubitt and I shall then explain
But no, ‘I should have acted sooner’ he solemnly confessed
And now his bird-like head once more is sunk upon his breast

Re: Circular poem

Date: 2017-01-15 01:47 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I loved that image, too, of the bird hunched over. Nice summary of the case.

Re: Circular poem

Date: 2017-01-15 01:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Yes, it was a great picture to work with. Thank you.

RE: Circular poem

Date: 2017-01-15 02:16 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
This works beautifully:-)

Re: Circular poem

Date: 2017-01-15 03:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you very much.

Re: Circular poem

Date: 2017-01-15 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Thank you - I'm glad you liked it.

Regarding Rachel's poem

Date: 2017-01-15 02:24 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
An apt and poignant choice.

Re: Regarding Rachel's poem

Date: 2017-01-15 03:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Indeed. A poignant poem about grief.

attempt circular

Date: 2017-01-15 04:44 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Malodorous scent of chimerical brew
was dispersed by whiff of strong, fresh, east-coast air
which, carrying fumes of gun’s foul powder, blew
throughout the manor-hall. Tickled, nostrils flared.
Smoke thinned. East Anglia’s bouquet, soured by rue,
faded as the three-forty chugged towards smell, laid bare,
of fine fowl, home-coming, on dinner plates, two.

Re: attempt circular

Date: 2017-01-15 05:30 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you! I suppose the circular part is the breeze blowing through the plot and carrying the different scents to the different settings London to Norfolk and back again.

Re: attempt circular

Date: 2017-01-15 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Let's hope Mrs Hudson had aired the rooms by the time of their return.

Re: attempt circular

Date: 2017-01-15 06:29 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yeah, dinner won't smell so good if the experiment has been brewing all the time they've been away.

Re: attempt circular

Date: 2017-01-15 06:37 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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