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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, is this week’s suggested poem to read—a suggestion inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poem, and perhaps it may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.



“Yet to die. Unalone still.”

By Osip Mandelstam, translation by John High


Note from Rachel: This poem seems to reflect the deep emotional connection, perhaps strengthened by their shared betrayal and suffering, that Anna felt towards her imprisoned friend, contrasting that pure feeling with her disdain for her wretched husband. In her dying moments, she was not alone in her heart.



Thank you so much to Rachel. And here is my suggested poetry form to revisit this week: the beeswing. (The link takes you back to a previous poetry page.)

But you do not have to use that form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epistle, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, florette, found poetry, free verse, ghazal, haiku, In Memoriam stanza, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, line messaging, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, musette, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Golden Pince-Nez in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Clerihew

Date: 2017-02-05 08:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Old Professor Coram
A model of pedant decorum
Books and routine and a cigarette haze
Concealing the vile deed of earlier days

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-02-05 12:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
And thankfully he was found out!

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-02-05 05:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
How many of the tales uncover the sinister past of outwardly-respectable Victorian types (the old judge, the wealthy landowner, the doddering scholar)?

RE: Clerihew

Date: 2017-02-05 01:08 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
The past always catches up.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-02-05 05:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
The sun will bring it to light!

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-02-05 01:22 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yeah, a lot of wickedness under that smoky exterior.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-02-05 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Like the wickedness behind a respectable JP (GLOR) or a wealthy landowner (BOSC).

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-02-05 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks. I'm always relieved to find a good rhyme for an unusual Canon name.
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Re: Almost a beeswing

Date: 2017-02-05 12:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I like this interpretation - poor woman.

RE: Re: Almost a beeswing

Date: 2017-02-05 01:08 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you:-)

Re: Almost a beeswing

Date: 2017-02-05 01:22 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yes, very good characterization of the murder and murderer. She definitely spilled from the room. Very quickly.

RE: Re: Almost a beeswing

Date: 2017-02-05 02:27 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Sad for both.

RE: Re: Almost a beeswing

Date: 2017-02-05 07:13 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you...such a frantic situation

Beeswing

Date: 2017-02-05 12:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Inspector Hopkins has removed his outerwear
Borrowed a towel and dried his hair
With less to wear and dry hair, I am imagining him completely …
[O/N: Mouselet has unfortunately drooled all over the last word]

RE: Beeswing

Date: 2017-02-05 01:09 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Oh, mouselet...now we shall never know...:-p

Re: Beeswing

Date: 2017-02-05 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Sorry, but sigh ...

Re: Beeswing

Date: 2017-02-05 01:20 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Oh, my goodness. What a loss. Like the Mona Lisa with an eye patch!

Re: Beeswing

Date: 2017-02-05 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
The world will probably survive without knowing.

Re: Beeswing

Date: 2017-02-05 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Very probably. (The Ocelot isn't entirely convinced Mouselet knows the word).
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
A word, dear Holmes, while Hopkins dries and smokes and drinks his storm-cure shandy;
this time, do bear in mind his Christian name is not Gerard, it’s Stanley.
Why Stanley, Watson? Far more handy, think of Hopkins, think of Manly.
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Awesome - and hilarious. I hope the hint works ;)
Edited Date: 2017-02-05 01:23 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thanks. It wouldn't do for the wrong name to slip out.
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you, thank you, the pun muse is strong this weekend. Poor Hopkins, it's that damp shirt (a la Colin Firth in the lake) that had its effect on...well, almost everyone in residence apparently.

Beeswing.

Date: 2017-02-05 01:19 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Guilty snared by a pair of golden spectacles’ omission.
Guilty, held captive, walled-in by fate’s foul juxtaposition.
Mission doomed sans near-position of like-minded optician.

Re: Beeswing.

Date: 2017-02-05 01:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Great summary and really very clever wording. Excellent!

Re: Beeswing.

Date: 2017-02-05 01:41 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you, thank you! It was a fun form.

Re: Beeswing.

Date: 2017-02-05 05:25 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you. And I see (ha, more puns) that we were thinking eye-to-eye on the optician bit.

RE: Beeswing.

Date: 2017-02-05 11:38 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Very well done:-)

Re: Beeswing.

Date: 2017-02-05 11:44 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Rachel's poem

Date: 2017-02-05 01:37 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very poignant and somber. I liked the first line/title.

Re: Rachel's poem

Date: 2017-02-05 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rachelindeed.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it -- and yes, it's a haunting first line. The author was a Russian dissident who was tortured under Stalin. The state 'disappeared' him and it's thought that he died in a Soviet prison camp. So his real life had many tragic similarities with this week's story.

RE: Rachel's poem

Date: 2017-02-05 02:28 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Yes...apt and so sad.

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