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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, is this week’s suggested poem to read—a suggestion inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poem, and perhaps it may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.



King Lear, Edmund's monologue "Thou, nature, art my goddess"

By William Shakespeare




Thank you so much to Rachel. And here is also a new poetry form to try: the barzelletta.


Lawrence Eberhart on Poets Collective gives this definition (for the ‘couplet’ barzelletta):

...Often composed as a joke with moral instruction there is also evidence of serious love poems linked to the Barzelletta...

• The “couplet” Barzelletta is:

○ lyrical.
○ stanzaic, written in any number of couplets.
○ metered, often iambic, line length optional although originally octosyllabic.
○ often written employing internal rhyme, end words are usually unrhymed.
○ written with wit and a didactic (instructional) and/or aphor[ist]ic (concise statement of scientific principle) tone.



As a reminder, if you wanted to use an iambic, octosyllabic line, that would be: te TUM, te TUM, te TUM, te TUM.



Here is my example:


A violin from dusk to dawn
Hold up your chin, and show your pluck

Not all can win sweet victory
With each gin there comes the tonic

Here floating in comes more flotsam
Please use the bin and not the floor

Though there’s a skin you’re left to clean
You have to grin and… bear it all.




But you do not have to use that form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, barzelletta, beeswing, blackout poetry, blitz poem, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, compound word verse, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, echo verse, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epistle, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, florette, found poetry, free verse, ghazal, haiku, hay(na)ku, In Memoriam stanza, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, lies, limerick, line messaging, list poem, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, musette, nonsense verse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quatern, quintilla, renga, rhyming alliterisen, riddle, rime couée, rispetto, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, shadorma, sonnet, stream of consciousness, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Priory School in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-14 07:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Bastard (er, Master) James Wilder
Stole his half-brother, Saltire the child heir,
And helped murder a teacher. But they will be lenient
Because he repented his part. How convenient.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-14 03:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Yeah the end of this one just screams 'deadline approaching, Doyle wants to get back to his REAL writing thank you.' An uneven hand of justice at times - Bob Norbertson in SHOS also needed to be looking at ruination and prison as well.

Poor little Lord Saltire doesn't even appear in this story - he's the McGuffin that triggers the case.

I was pretty chuffed at coming up with 'child heir' as a rhyme for 'Wilder' myself.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-14 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Ah, but he's taking a sea voyage - there's hope yet ;)

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-14 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
That is true. Unfortunate voyagers get chloroformed and thrown fall overboard all the time

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-14 02:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
I like lenient and convenient. It is far too convenient for me, too. And Christ, Australia, full of all the loonies and the spineless.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-14 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
As was noted above, it IS a sea voyage. Accidents happen.

RE: Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-14 06:12 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Neat rhyme choices:-)

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-14 11:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Thanks much. I was pretty chuffed at coming up with "child heir" for "Wilder" myself.

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