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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

And here, courtesy of my housemaid Rachel, is this week’s suggested poem to read—a suggestion inspired by the themes and subjects in this week's story. Hopefully you will enjoy the poem, and perhaps it may give you some ideas for a poem of your own or allow you to look at Dr. Watson's story in a new way.



Epitaph on a Tyrant

By W. H. Auden



Note from Rachel: This is how his people remember the Tiger of San Pedro.



Thank you so much to Rachel. And here is also a new poetry form to try: the décima.


Wikipedia gives this definition:

A décima is a ten-line stanza of poetry...

The décima deals with a wide range of subject matter, including themes that are philosophical, religious, lyrical, and political. Humorous décimas typically would satirize an individual's weakness or foolish act...

The décima in all Latin America and in Spain is a style of poetry that is octosyllabic and has 10 lines to the stanza. The rhyming scheme is ABBAACCDDC...

Given the flexible method of counting syllables in Spanish verse, where an "octosyllabic" line could easily have seven or nine syllables (as normally counted), in writing a décima in English it would seem not unreasonable to write in iambic pentameter (theoretically ten syllables), which comes more naturally to English verse.



Here is my example:


Mr. S. Holmes wished to entertain four—
Four inspectors with appetites hearty.
I was dispatched to shop for the party:
I began with meat, fish and cheese galore;
Checked the list, somewhat paled, and bought some more.
Puddings, sweetmeats, cakes—my strength was waning;
I bore it all home with muscles straining.
I arrived though to find an empty space:
Mr. Holmes et al had left on a case.
I don’t call that very entertaining.




But you do not have to use that form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, barzelletta, beeswing, blackout poetry, blitz poem, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, compound word verse, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, décima, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, echo verse, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epistle, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, florette, found poetry, free verse, ghazal, haiku, hay(na)ku, In Memoriam stanza, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, lies, limerick, line messaging, list poem, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, musette, nonsense verse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quatern, quintilla, renga, rhyming alliterisen, riddle, rime couée, rispetto, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, shadorma, sonnet, stream of consciousness, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Adventure of Wisteria Lodge in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-21 07:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Mr. Scott Eccles
Conservative, bachelor, feckless
Spends a night with a friend and the household is gone
And into a maelstrom of bloodshed he’s drawn

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-21 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
I was pleased myself - tough to compact everything into a little rhyme-scheme.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-21 11:37 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very feckless. Great job!

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-21 06:46 pm (UTC)

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-21 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
"I feel so used."

RE: Clerihew

Date: 2017-05-21 08:49 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Neatly rhymed...an odd set up altogether.

Decima

Date: 2017-05-21 08:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
In my walk I look for green shoots
Holding tight my botany book
Trying not to fall in the brook
I am wearing holes in my boots
And am tired of falling o’er roots
My evenings are spent in the bar
The atmosphere’s better by far
I drink down pints of the best beer
And then quite brimful with good cheer
It’s home by the light of a star

Re: Decima

Date: 2017-05-21 11:38 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Nice look at the two sides of surveillance.

Re: Decima

Date: 2017-05-21 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Some parts are more enjoyable than others.

Re: Decima

Date: 2017-05-21 05:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I don't think poetic was quite the feeling at the time ;)

RE: Decima

Date: 2017-05-21 08:50 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Very nice
Pleased the day ended well:-)

Re: Decima

Date: 2017-05-21 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
By far the better part!

decima: Mister Scott Eccles

Date: 2017-05-21 11:39 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Oh, Mister John Scott Eccles, tell
how one so without guile survives?
A perfect upright fool who strives
to rush where angels dare not dwell.
How near were you, yet spared the hell!
A friendship far too fast and close,
a visit strange, a stranger host.
Disturbed in sleep, disturbed awake
a house deserted, horror state.
Of ‘sociable turn,’ sir, do not boast!





Re: decima: Mister Scott Eccles

Date: 2017-05-21 05:36 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yes! He does remark on Garcia's good looks, though I have to say that the most conservative family member I have once said (upon visiting Argentina) what a beautiful people they were. But one would think that a conservative, respectable member of Victorian society would be a little more wary of fast entanglements. But then I suppose in Doyle's mind it's sort of a social equivalent of offering him a strange job at an exorbitant wage.

Thank you. Hard to find simple words for that 1 am wake-up. Not my best work, but tomorrow's another day.

Re: decima: Mister Scott Eccles

Date: 2017-05-21 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
One wonders why he didn't think a little more before he acted.

Re: decima: Mister Scott Eccles

Date: 2017-05-21 05:37 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
And how did he get to be a respectable churchman otherwise?!

Re: decima: Mister Scott Eccles

Date: 2017-05-21 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Yeah. What a babe in the woods that guy was. The perils of a sheltered life.

Re: decima: Mister Scott Eccles

Date: 2017-05-21 07:08 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
He's like a character in a horror film: Run away, man!!

RE: decima: Mister Scott Eccles

Date: 2017-05-21 08:52 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
I really liked this...such an odd adventure for him.

Re: decima: Mister Scott Eccles

Date: 2017-05-21 09:12 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Holmes calls women inscrutable, but I think Eccles takes the prize. What was he thinking?!

Mrs. Hudson's poem

Date: 2017-05-21 12:23 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Very frustrating! I suppose Bessie and the girls will dine well, though. Love the pun at the end!

RE: Mrs. Hudson's poem

Date: 2017-05-21 08:55 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
A note of weary resignation, Mrs H?

Rachel's poem

Date: 2017-05-21 12:25 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Eerie similarities to a current situation...tyrants always fall, but the suffering, before and after, is tragic.
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Re: A Ballad in parts...written earlier

Date: 2017-05-21 05:40 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Holy smokes! Well done. I like what you did there (I don't know if it has a name) where you link the last line of a stanza to the first words of the following.

RE: Re: A Ballad in parts...written earlier

Date: 2017-05-21 08:58 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you:-)
No idea if it has a name as a form, it just helped the flow:-)

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