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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then go on to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

Usually at this point my housemaid Rachel, inspired by the week’s story, comes up with a poem for us all to read but she has suggested something a little different this time. And so today we are all going on an excursion to an apparently world famous music hall: ‘YouTube’, where we will listen to Miss Carly Simon sing ‘You’re So Vain’. (I will be providing a hamper of various foodstuffs for the trip. However, I must emphasise the gin is for my use only—if you wish to buy an alcoholic drink I believe a bar is available.)



The express train to YouTube can be caught here.




Everyone back safely? Splendid!

Though…

Where is Mrs. Small-Hobbit?

Yes, Mrs. Frankles?

Well, if you saw her having a final cider in the bar, why on earth did you not tell her we were leaving for the station?

Oh… Yes, I suppose I can agree she does tend to have an unfortunate effect on the railways but... Did you at least leave her your Bradshaw?

You did?

Fingers crossed then.




So let’s move on! Here is a new poetry form to try: the descort.


Robert Lee Brewer on Writer’s Digest gives this definition:

The descort differentiates itself from other forms by differentiating its lines from other lines within the poem. That is, the main rule of descort poems is that each line needs to be different from every other line in the poem.

A descort poem has different line lengths, meters, avoids rhyming with other lines, no refrains, and that goes for stanzas as well. In other words, no two lines in a descort should look like each other, and the same could be said for each descort.

Note: This is different than free verse, because even free verse may occasionally have similar line lengths and meter. However, descort is very intentional in its variability.



Here is my example:


Here
In the caliginous, crepuscular, comfortless gloom,
It’s not to hide my fading looks.
Mr. Holmes has shot out the bulbs.
(Fa la la la.)




But you do not have to use this form. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, barzelletta, beeswing, blackout poetry, blitz poem, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, compound word verse, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, débat, décima, descort, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, echo verse, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, enuig, epigram, epistle, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, florette, found poetry, free verse, ghazal, haiku, hay(na)ku, In Memoriam stanza, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, lies, limerick, line messaging, list poem, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, musette, nonsense verse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quatern, quintilla, renga, rhyming alliterisen, riddle, rimas dissolutas, rime couée, rispetto, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, shadorma, sonnet, stream of consciousness, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, tricube, trine, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Three Gables in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Clerihew

Date: 2017-07-02 07:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Boxer Steven Dixie
Hired for punches and kicks. He
Threatened the sleuth and was driven away
(Holmes, beneath you, the racist things that you say)

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-07-02 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Doyle, next time you let someone ghost-write a SH story based on one of your outlines, make sure they've READ some of the original stories first.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-07-02 02:42 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yeah, not Holmes's finest hour. For shame!

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-07-02 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
I could hear Mark Twain head-desking in Vermont from here.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-07-02 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
I too ignore bits of Canon that don't correlate with the rest. Writers make mistakes.

RE: Clerihew

Date: 2017-07-02 03:42 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Well done
Such an odd tale.

Re: Clerihew

Date: 2017-07-02 07:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Meanwhile Mark Twain is banging his head on his desk at his farm in Vermont and saying, "Arthur - have you ever actually MET a black man?"
(deleted comment)

RE: Re: On the subject of descorts

Date: 2017-07-02 03:43 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Indeed...I believe the original descorts were sung.

Re: On the subject of descorts

Date: 2017-07-02 02:43 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yeah, I struggled with this one, too. No internal rhyme, no alliteration, no rhythm, what's it all for?

RE: Re: On the subject of descorts

Date: 2017-07-02 03:44 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Bit of a puzzle.

RE: Re: On the subject of descorts

Date: 2017-07-02 03:45 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Thank you:-)
Not his finest tale:-)

Note from Inspector Lestrade

Date: 2017-07-02 11:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Mrs Small-Hobbit has been located. It appears she decided to walk back, stopping at various places on the way. She was found singing "Show me the way to go home ..."

We will return her when she finally stops singing.
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com

I am a Ferret
Steve Dixie had a salmon-coloured tie

Go to Three Gables by train
And cab
Walking is nice

Doctor Watson has a moustache
Edited Date: 2017-07-02 11:49 am (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Hee, hee. Excellent! I think. I'm not sure what the bar is here.
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Not just the Ferret who's been at the punch then!
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
In which case, shall we share a jug of Pimms? Just push any ferret-shaped heads out of the way.
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Gin's not good for ferrets, anyway. More for us!

descort

Date: 2017-07-02 02:48 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Crown Derby tea-set
(Old Imari pattern)
perfect for
a
March Hare’s party.
Rare, perhaps, but the real mystery is why one’d want to nibble scones from a bone china playing card in which there was a grave possibility of losing sight of them in the foliage and being distracted from one’s afternoon Darjeeling by the riddle of which suit is trumps on the side of one’s cup.
No, thank you, Mrs. Maberley,
I’ll take
244
pages of your son’s
revenge porn
and be on my way. For I’m late, you see, for…
…what I can’t say!

Edited Date: 2017-07-02 02:48 pm (UTC)

Re: descort

Date: 2017-07-02 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
Most impressive. I believe you have captured the form extremely well.

Re: descort

Date: 2017-07-02 04:13 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Thank you. Alice in Wonderland is my go-to reference for Things I Just Don't Understand. And did you know the pattern? What were they thinking?

RE: descort

Date: 2017-07-02 03:46 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Oh, this is brilliant:-)

Re: descort

Date: 2017-07-02 04:16 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
The Old Imari pattern (which is what I assume Mrs. Maberley had) is really garish to the modern eye. I don't know why anyone would want to steal it (or buy a house for it). I'll take ol' Dougie's weepy angstfic any day of the week over that!

Thank you!

Re: descort

Date: 2017-07-02 04:20 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Of course I had to look up the Crown Derby tea set that Mrs. Maberley thinks is worth buying a house for and wow! That is decidedly not elegant at all. I mean it looks sort of like playing cards, but not exactly, so you'd be very distracted, I think. And yeah, another plug for poor ol' Dougie's angst fic. I mean, I bet it's worth at least 40 kudos and a couple bookmarks on AO3. And I couldn't even rhyme the last bit. Oh, the poet bound!

Mrs. Hudson's poem

Date: 2017-07-02 04:29 pm (UTC)
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Really the last line betrays your genius at this form, Mrs. H. The line about the lighting stick rankles from last round.

Date: 2017-07-02 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rachelindeed.livejournal.com
I adore the way you've framed our trip to the music hall, Mrs. H! *giggles*

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