The Three Gables: Petals

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Canon Story: The Three Gables
Title: Petals
Author: Mafief
Rating: G
Warnings: none


Wildfire like obsession engulfed them in a blaze of passion and desire.

She loves him.

Keeping with her plans, the enchantment was broken. Another suitor was needed.

She loves him not.

He could see the rest of his life devoted to her and only her.

He loves her.

Battered and bruised, he decided to ruin her.

I love her not.

Comments

[gardnerhill.livejournal.com]

A good look at the obsessive nature of this love affair.

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Yah, their relationship isn’t all that healthy…

[okapi1895.livejournal.com]

Ooo! Very well done. Love the way you arranged it on the 'page.'

[mafief.livejournal.com]

I’m glad you liked it and the alignment worked for you. The different alignments looked good in my word processor and I was worried about it how it would translate to this web page.

[debriswoman]

This is very clever, and so sad.
Well done.

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Thank you. :)
It’s just not a happy affair and super messy.

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Echoing the above. That's a really clever take on the story, and really well put across.

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I’m thrilled that it’s translating right on the page.

[scfrankles.livejournal.com]

He loves her... I love her not. A nice nod to that shift in the final line of his novel.

As everyone else has said, such a clever idea - your story works so well.

[mafief.livejournal.com]

The shift in the novel was my inspiration and I wanted to add that in somehow.
And thank you. :)

[alafaye]

Oo. This is an interesting way to write this story. Well done.

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Btw, I like the guidance that you’ve provided for the 60s.

[alafaye]

♥

I can only hope I can match this strength week after week. *fingers are crossed*

[mafief.livejournal.com]

I wish you the best of luck with that! I find the year plus activity to be really daunting (a year is long time...). So, I'll be cheering for you. :)

[alafaye]

Thank you :)