The Abbey Grange: Of Course She's Back

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Canon Story: The Abbey Grange
Title: Of Course She's Back
Author: Mouselet
Rating: G

Dr Watson’s account leaves much to be desired as to a description of dear Inspector Hopkins.  His features are neither delicate, which would not suit a man of action, nor pronounced, but show to perfection his courage and his commitment.  His limbs are strong; his grey eyes are firm, but compassionate; altogether he is the true perfection of a man.

[Ocelot’s Note: Just be grateful Mouselet was restricted to 60 words!]

Comments

[debriswoman]

Much more important than details of the case, Mouselet:-)

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

That was exactly what she thought.

[okapi1895.livejournal.com]

Of course! Thank you, Mouselet, for filling in an important gap.

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

That's no trouble at all :)

[scfrankles.livejournal.com]

Beautifully done, Mouselet! *applauds*

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you! *preens whiskers*

[alafaye]

Aw. Yes I do think you're quite right dear in that Watson did not do the man justice.

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Mouselet is convinced everyone needs to know how wonderful Hopkins is.

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Maybe this level of detail was in the first draft... Yah, and it was the editors fault for removing them.

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

It would appear the editor does not think the readers would be interested in a proper description of the wonderful inspector. They Are Wrong!