Bruce-Partington Plans : Secret Sub Summary

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Canon Story: The Adventure of the Bruce-Partington Plans
Title: Secret Sub Summary
Author: Mafief
Rating: G
Warnings: none
Author’s Notes: Terse text to twist the tongue


Train travels through tunnels in the terra
From a convex covered cab compartment, corpse crashes
Down descends the demigod-like demanding details of the documents and deceased
All arrows of accusation are against the accused
Faith of the Fallen’s fiancé fails to falter
Clear clues change, and the crime culminates cryptic characteristics
Valentine: victim of his vices
Secret sub schematics secured

Comments

[minervas-eule.livejournal.com]

Bravo! How original and at the same time to the point!

[mafief.livejournal.com]

::bows:: Thank you and thanks for commenting. :)

[okapi1895.livejournal.com]

Wow! *claps wildly* That a tough form and you did brilliantly with it. Well done! Especially like the D and V lines.

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Well, now I'm blushing. I'm glad you like it. :)

[gardnerhill.livejournal.com]

Bravo, brilliant brainstorm, perfectly penned paragraph!

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Tremendous thanks for the kind comment

[debriswoman]

Great use of language and a neat summary:-)

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :)

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

Most impressive. I especially liked the first C and the S lines.

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :D
I am thrilled I got to use the word convex in a poem.

[alafaye]

Wow. I like it!

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Sweet, I'm glad you do!

[scfrankles.livejournal.com]

Elegantly done - I particularly like:

Down descends the demigod-like demanding details of the documents and deceased

and

Faith of the Fallen’s fiancé fails to falter

[mafief.livejournal.com]

Thank you. The D line is my personal favorite.