The Adventure of the Engineer's Thumb: Gift

[spacemutineer.livejournal.com]

Canon Story: The Adventure of the Engineer's Thumb
Title: Gift
Author: spacemutineer
Rating: G


Sheer determination alone must have carried Hatherley up the seventeen steps to see me.

"Mr. Holmes."

He held out his uninjured hand, as pale and clammy as his face, and it bobbed in the air in time with his bounding heart. Somehow he was still standing.

Only a truly singular experience inspires such resolve. Watson had brought me a gift.

Comments

[castiron.livejournal.com]

Cold and machinelike indeed -- could even Hatherley repair him? Well done!

[tweedisgood.livejournal.com]

But then again, he'd insist he wasn't broken, wouldn't he? Agreed, nice look at Holmes the case-hound.

[spacemutineer.livejournal.com]

I think he'd feel he was killing two birds with one stone. He gets a good puzzle, and Hatherley gets his answers. Everyone wins. So glad you liked!

[spacemutineer.livejournal.com]

I don't think Holmes is necessarily completely without sympathy here, but his top priority is always his own interest. He probably thinks he'll be helping Hatherley while he gets his own enjoyment at the same time.

Thanks very much!

[hardboiledbaby]

Holmes' eagerness for the case is very evident. Nicely done!

[spacemutineer.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank you! He's usually eager for any good case, and this one is pretty out there. :)

[methylviolet10b]

From this, I get the irresistable image of Watson as a cat, bringing Holmes a mouse as a token of his affection. "Look, see, it's even still bleeding and wriggling a bit!" ;-)

[spacemutineer.livejournal.com]

Oh, YES. I love that! The quote is priceless!