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sherlock60Welcome once again to my poetry page!
I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then be inspired to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.
This week my featured form is Parallelismus Membrorum.
Poetry Magnum Opus gives this definition:
Parallelismus Membrorum or grammatical parallelism is of traditional Hebrew origin and dates back to biblical times. It is an independent clause presenting parallels or opposites in balance using contrasting and complimentary extensions.
The verse employs the same grammatical elements for each side of the parallel. This pattern is often used in prose poetry or is written in long lines often broken at the caesura into couplets making 2 short lines, 4 to 6 words each.
From the Hebrew text Proverbs 10:1
A wise son gladdens his father,
but a foolish son grieves his mother.
Here is my example poem:
A man who values learning
but who doesn’t value the teacher.
A man who values thought
but who doesn’t think before speaking.
A man who values his friend
but who diminishes his work.
A man who values the science of deduction
but who didn’t predict Dr. Watson’s rugby tackle.
As always, this is simply something to consider for the future. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:
221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, Italian sonnet, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, tyburn, villanelle
Please leave all your poems inspired by The Sussex Vampire in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!
Warm regards,
Mrs. Hudson
I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then be inspired to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.
This week my featured form is Parallelismus Membrorum.
Poetry Magnum Opus gives this definition:
Parallelismus Membrorum or grammatical parallelism is of traditional Hebrew origin and dates back to biblical times. It is an independent clause presenting parallels or opposites in balance using contrasting and complimentary extensions.
The verse employs the same grammatical elements for each side of the parallel. This pattern is often used in prose poetry or is written in long lines often broken at the caesura into couplets making 2 short lines, 4 to 6 words each.
From the Hebrew text Proverbs 10:1
A wise son gladdens his father,
but a foolish son grieves his mother.
Here is my example poem:
but who doesn’t value the teacher.
A man who values thought
but who doesn’t think before speaking.
A man who values his friend
but who diminishes his work.
A man who values the science of deduction
but who didn’t predict Dr. Watson’s rugby tackle.
As always, this is simply something to consider for the future. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:
221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, Italian sonnet, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, tyburn, villanelle
Please leave all your poems inspired by The Sussex Vampire in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!
Mrs. Hudson
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Limerick
Date: 2016-01-31 08:30 am (UTC)See all with a cool reasoned eye:
She was saving her child.
Elder son, warped and wild:
There’s enough human evil nearby.
Re: Limerick
Date: 2016-01-31 11:24 am (UTC)Re: Limerick
Date: 2016-02-01 12:23 am (UTC)Re: Limerick
Date: 2016-01-31 11:56 am (UTC)Re: Limerick
Date: 2016-02-01 12:28 am (UTC)Re: Limerick
Date: 2016-01-31 01:31 pm (UTC)Re: Limerick
Date: 2016-02-01 12:40 am (UTC)RE: Limerick
Date: 2016-01-31 01:31 pm (UTC)Neatly done.
Re: Limerick
Date: 2016-02-01 12:29 am (UTC)Parallelismus Membrorum
Date: 2016-01-31 11:01 am (UTC)A loving mother who drinks her child’s blood.
An innocent baby who’s apparently cursed;
A devoted son who’d bereave daddy if he could.
Re: Parallelismus Membrorum
Date: 2016-01-31 11:58 am (UTC)Re: Parallelismus Membrorum
Date: 2016-01-31 05:38 pm (UTC)Re: Parallelismus Membrorum
Date: 2016-01-31 06:08 pm (UTC)RE: Parallelismus Membrorum
Date: 2016-01-31 01:32 pm (UTC)And yes...such a complicated family.
Re: Parallelismus Membrorum
Date: 2016-01-31 05:40 pm (UTC)Re: Parallelismus Membrorum
Date: 2016-01-31 01:35 pm (UTC)Re: Parallelismus Membrorum
Date: 2016-01-31 05:43 pm (UTC)Re: Written earlier...trust
Date: 2016-01-31 11:41 am (UTC)It makes for a very dramatic retelling, seeing things from Jack's POV. And in terms of rhymes, I particularly liked: Her face, now white and bloodied,/ My father's sad conclusion;/ The facts are blurred and muddied;/ I savour this confusion.
I can't condone his actions but I do sympathise with Jack to a certain extent - his mother has died, a stranger has come to live in his home and he has no choice in that, and there is a new child for his father to concentrate on. Attacking the baby is a terrible reaction to these circumstances though, of course.
RE: Re: Written earlier...trust
Date: 2016-01-31 01:34 pm (UTC)Re: Written earlier...trust
Date: 2016-01-31 11:59 am (UTC)RE: Re: Written earlier...trust
Date: 2016-01-31 01:35 pm (UTC)Re: Written earlier...trust
Date: 2016-01-31 01:38 pm (UTC)RE: Re: Written earlier...trust
Date: 2016-01-31 05:17 pm (UTC)Re: Written earlier...trust
Date: 2016-01-31 04:43 pm (UTC)And well pointed out, that Jackie did a good bit of planning.
RE: Re: Written earlier...trust
Date: 2016-01-31 05:17 pm (UTC)stil stuck on the rugby bit, attempt parallelismus
Date: 2016-01-31 12:00 pm (UTC)Watson in the front, Watson in the rear
All good, good all!
RE: stil stuck on the rugby bit, attempt parallelismus
Date: 2016-01-31 01:37 pm (UTC)Re: stil stuck on the rugby bit, attempt parallelismus
Date: 2016-01-31 02:08 pm (UTC)Re: stil stuck on the rugby bit, attempt parallelismus
Date: 2016-01-31 01:40 pm (UTC)Re: stil stuck on the rugby bit, attempt parallelismus
Date: 2016-01-31 02:10 pm (UTC)Re: stil stuck on the rugby bit, attempt parallelismus
Date: 2016-01-31 05:47 pm (UTC)Re: stil stuck on the rugby bit, attempt parallelismus
Date: 2016-01-31 06:17 pm (UTC)Re: stil stuck on the rugby bit, attempt parallelismus
Date: 2016-02-01 12:51 am (UTC)The Vs
Date: 2016-01-31 12:44 pm (UTC)The tale of how Holmes began, the Voyage of the Gloria Scott
Venomous lizard or gila, a very remarkable story to tell
Then there was the surprising case of Vittoria the circus belle
Vogir the Hammersmith wonder, whose deeds were extremely dire
And finally we find details of the most astonishing Transylvanian vampire
RE: The Vs
Date: 2016-01-31 02:07 pm (UTC)Re: The Vs
Date: 2016-01-31 02:20 pm (UTC)Re: The Vs
Date: 2016-01-31 05:49 pm (UTC)Very clever, madam ^_^
Re: The Vs
Date: 2016-01-31 06:31 pm (UTC)Re: The Vs
Date: 2016-01-31 11:57 pm (UTC)Re: The Vs
Date: 2016-02-01 01:34 pm (UTC)Re: The Vs
Date: 2016-01-31 06:16 pm (UTC)Re: The Vs
Date: 2016-01-31 07:18 pm (UTC)Re: The Vs
Date: 2016-02-01 12:53 am (UTC)Re: The Vs
Date: 2016-02-01 01:33 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2016-01-31 01:36 pm (UTC)I wonder what prompted his filing of vampire detail...
no subject
Date: 2016-01-31 02:21 pm (UTC)no subject
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