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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sherlock60
Welcome once again to my poetry page!

I hope each week you will read Dr. Watson’s delightful narrative and then be inspired to write a poem related to it in some way. All forms of poetry are permitted, and further down the page there is a selection you might like to consider using over the coming weeks.

This week my featured form is Parallelismus Membrorum.

Poetry Magnum Opus gives this definition:

Parallelismus Membrorum or grammatical parallelism is of traditional Hebrew origin and dates back to biblical times. It is an independent clause presenting parallels or opposites in balance using contrasting and complimentary extensions.

The verse employs the same grammatical elements for each side of the parallel. This pattern is often used in prose poetry or is written in long lines often broken at the caesura into couplets making 2 short lines, 4 to 6 words each.


From the Hebrew text Proverbs 10:1

A wise son gladdens his father,
but a foolish son grieves his mother.




Here is my example poem:


A man who values learning
but who doesn’t value the teacher.
A man who values thought
but who doesn’t think before speaking.
A man who values his friend
but who diminishes his work.
A man who values the science of deduction
but who didn’t predict Dr. Watson’s rugby tackle.




As always, this is simply something to consider for the future. Any form of poetry is welcome this week—and every week! Here are a few suggestions for you:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, beeswing, blackout poetry, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, colour poems, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, epigram, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, found poetry, ghazal, haiku, Italian sonnet, kennings poem, lanturne, limerick, lyric poetry, mathnawī, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, quintilla, renga, riddle, rime couée, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, sonnet, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, triolet, tyburn, villanelle


Please leave all your poems inspired by The Sussex Vampire in the comments on this post. I look forward to seeing them!


Warm regards,

Mrs. Hudson

Limerick

Date: 2016-01-31 08:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
No vampires or ghosts need apply.
See all with a cool reasoned eye:
She was saving her child.
Elder son, warped and wild:
There’s enough human evil nearby.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-02-01 12:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
Vampire legends may have sprung up during one of the Black Death epidemics, when who knows how many not-quite-dead victims tried to escape the burn-pits and scared the crap out of people. Or maybe it was TB - pale, languid people with blood on their lips like consumption patients.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-01-31 11:56 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com
Yeah, they got enough trouble with the living. No supernatural ghouls needed.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-02-01 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
You want TWILIGHT, it's over that way - this is a SCOOBY-DOO neighborhood!
Edited Date: 2016-02-01 12:28 am (UTC)

RE: Limerick

Date: 2016-01-31 01:31 pm (UTC)
debriswoman: (cat and mouse)
From: [personal profile] debriswoman
Yes...monstrous actions without monsters.
Neatly done.

Re: Limerick

Date: 2016-02-01 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com
The single scariest episode of SUPERNATURAL dealt with a very human family (the Benders) who hunted other human beings just for fun. Pure, raw human evil - not a demon or ghoul in sight.

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